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Sep 09, 2007, 11:56 AM
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 Newbie  | your smile The tears run down my face. In my heart lies a empty space. Where your love once was. Ive heard the pain go's away. But I dont believe it. Because all thats left is pain! The beat of my heart fades. As my eyes close the last thing I see. Is a smile on your face! by leftinthedark aka nicole!
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Sep 09, 2007, 01:22 PM
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 Still pointing the sword?  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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If it is... then you have touched on a very real topic to me. I believe there is someone who I thought onced loved me, who would now love to see me die.
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Sep 09, 2007, 01:30 PM
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Credits: 14,101 | Re: your smile wow that was good, Alot better than the other. I love it lots. ^.^ Keep it up.! Hope to see more!
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Sep 09, 2007, 02:17 PM
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| Chtonian Slayer  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know
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Credits: 31,306 | Re: your smile Awesome job!!!!!! Full of pain and raw emotion!!!\ I can almost taste the sadness...........
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Sep 17, 2007, 03:41 PM
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Credits: 160 | Re: your smile OMG nicole, that was really good, your one of the best writers ever and i'm not just saying that you great, i lvove you my sister..
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Sep 18, 2007, 04:09 AM
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Credits: 58,560 | Re: your smile Hey...u did not tell me u had a lil sis..  Hmm...i like the imaginary in this.. and the ending was...like.. whammy~! its slow but gives a long lasting impact~! so.. wwhammy~!! Keep up the good work  |
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