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Your Woman
Do Roses really smell like poo?
There's only one way to find out
Do what you do
As I'm your womans scout
Watch the equivalence of love
Watch as she fiends for me
She sees me as the one given from above
Nothing matters anymore, not even your begs and pleas
This love she desires isn't from you
But it's for me
She wants something new
All she wants is a G
Now step back and please leave
Theres now room for you here
Your woman wants me
OH my god is that a tear!?!
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Re: Your Woman
Free verse poetry is the style that I see here! I also like how you added a little comedy to your poem by saying "Oh my god is that a tear!?!" The truth does hurt and to put in poetry form like this to get the message is brilliant.