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    You're not the one?

    Once you left I ask myself why weren't you the one
    I knew I choose you from everyone
    You made me think you only care for yourself
    Since that didn't help I just start asking myself

    If I didn't remember you, why did your name remain in my head
    If I didn't need you, why do I cry for you on my bed
    If I didn't want you, why are you that only one in my life
    If I didn't love you, why do I want to be your wife

    If I didn't care for you, then why am I writing this poem in the first place
    All I can remember is your beautiful voice and face
    I still wonder if you feel the same
    Or maybe not I'm crazy so I'll just close my eyes with shame

    Ok I was losing ideas so yeah! I hope you all like it!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Your not the one?

    losing ideas??? how can you say that! that was extreme MORE MORE MORE! it nearly put me in tears but you shall not break me! oh yes i forgot


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    Re: Your not the one?

    Quote Originally Posted by Mini Dev View Post
    losing ideas??? how can you say that! that was extreme MORE MORE MORE! it nearly put me in tears but you shall not break me! oh yes i forgot

    Thank you tons! Mini Dev! I really thank you!!!!!!!
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    Re: Your not the one?

    No it's me that should be thanking you for your amazing poems they rock i absoutly love poems sooo much

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    Re: Your not the one?

    Quote Originally Posted by Mini Dev View Post
    No it's me that should be thanking you for your amazing poems they rock i absoutly love poems sooo much
    I really thank for that comment as well!!! Your so nice really! But I just want to thank you so gratefully!
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    Re: Your not the one?

    Well ummm thanks well i've got to go but i'll add u 2 my network cya

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    Re: Your not the one?

    Love poems........*sarcastic tone* wonderful........
    I do like how this one is done. makes sense and brings home a certain point that has something to do with a situation I'm dealing with..........Someone loves me, yet I'm really not worth their time. I've always been "untouchable" to others. Yet she wants me despite the distance between us and the simple fact that I'm still a broke ass loser. She who has so much opportunity and potential and me, a frickin burn-out with a mentality that screams "future serial killer" who uses illegal meds to keep from doing something stupid.

    Sounds like something she'd say, this poem. I found it intriguing. So I posted. Yay........*kicks a dog*
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Your not the one?

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23 View Post
    Love poems........*sarcastic tone* wonderful........
    I do like how this one is done. makes sense and brings home a certain point that has something to do with a situation I'm dealing with..........Someone loves me, yet I'm really not worth their time. I've always been "untouchable" to others. Yet she wants me despite the distance between us and the simple fact that I'm still a broke ass loser. She who has so much opportunity and potential and me, a frickin burn-out with a mentality that screams "future serial killer" who uses illegal meds to keep from doing something stupid.

    Sounds like something she'd say, this poem. I found it intriguing. So I posted. Yay........*kicks a dog*
    Thank you!!!! I thank you a lot for your comment and I do hope it works out as well for you!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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