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    You're a star

    Time follows the hand
    Destined like the falling sands
    The path goes to a magical land
    Where life can expand
    Everything is so grand

    Watching the flow
    Theres time to grow
    And everything is slow
    Take a deep breathe and blow

    Meditate and relax
    Look at the facts
    Take everything to the max
    Never listen to quacks
    Don't let nothing fall through the cracks

    Face your fear
    Closer than near
    Think clear
    Everything is dear
    Don't look at the smears
    It only brings tears

    Open your eyes
    You'll see the lies
    As your inner you flies
    Rise into the skies!

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: You're a star

    Ohh yeah! Im diggin this. lol
    I feel kinda mellowed when i read this like m giving this really cool poetic statement to the world. :3
    Good job dude!
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    Thank you I've had a lot of time to think so I wanna share the knowledge.

    THE RULES!

    I'm on my grind in search to find whats on my mind, its one of a kind!

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    Re: You're a star

    Hi,

    Really nice. While I was reading totally lost myself totally involved and enjoyed lot, and remember past days thank you. Me too interested to write little quotations. But your thoughts are super. Hey collect love poems, think differently and make a album and present to your Mom or to any loved one. Christmas is also near to us. You only told that you are free now.All the best.Merry Christmas.

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    i really like ur pome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    i love ur pome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!

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