I really like this one. It has the ring of truth to it. Very nicely done. It sounds like your grandma was one smart cookie. Keep up the good work.
All I hear about
Is pain and Love,
But there is more to life
Then the feelings
From the great above.
But sadly no one can see this,
All they can see is there lover’s kiss,
And a broken heart
They can’t help but miss.
So sad to see
The youth today,
Cry about things
They can’t even explain.
Grandma once told me,
Love and pain
Are one and same.
So get off that one
And find another game.
Happiness comes to
Those who earn it,
So get off your butt
And go experience it.
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I really like this one. It has the ring of truth to it. Very nicely done. It sounds like your grandma was one smart cookie. Keep up the good work.
its really nice!! its relates to real life in a way. Good Job!! =)
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Wow, that poem is sooo true!
xD granma......
Love it when you added her in
I know what you're trying to saying this poem *obvious right?*
Anyway...the poem was somehow entertaining
love ta hear more ^_^
-Zainab
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