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    Zombie

    I am not alive.
    I cannot be hurt.
    Not alike, although we've all derived from the same dirt.

    You fuel your own fire.
    The blaze, it keeps you hot.
    I will walk through your inferno, but affected... I am not.

    Though you start as a flame.
    To keep your souls from feeling lost,
    You spread like wild fire. You create a holocaust.

    Justify your destruction.
    Label it humanity.
    Hate the heartless, soulless, freaks. Spawned from your insanity.

    I am from your ashes.
    You are from the sand.
    Your evil has created me, but you don't understand.

    A product of your hatred.
    I've risen from the dust.
    I line your souls with fear, but it is you I cannot trust.

    My soul had a fire.
    My heart had too much pain to hold.
    My candle died out in your raging inferno. I was left walking... cold.

    Afraid I walk among you?
    My face can't be distinguished.
    Absorb your evil. 'Till I know your fire has extinguished.

    With each soul that I drain.
    Through its victims eyes I see.
    And I won't stop until you all are hollow... Just like me.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    My god... I just love this so much... I can't even explain how much... this is wonderful! A great work! And all these feelings- hatred, sadness... everything... it just took over me... great!!! This is my fav of yours from now on...

    I really want to see something more like this... wonderful... I think I could read it again and again... just perfect!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Auch, zombies!!

    Interesting topic. The walking dead. Mind you, I've known people who wouldn't even rate that high on the intelligence scale, but that's another topic...

    Now where did I but my gun collection...

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    sweet poem and it so full of hate
    and despisement , and ont many people
    understand what it means to have an
    extiguished soul because they only play
    at love.

    when it come to love and having it killed
    or smotherd you feel empty and you need
    something to feel that void so you fill it
    with the only thing available which is hate
    and mistrust.

    and anyone that says there nothing to grasp
    on to when your passion is stamped out like a flame
    has never really experinced true love becuase there is
    always something to grasp be hate , malice , or that
    blood lust that drives people to vengence , there will
    always be things to grasp if there was true love.

    if you cant find anything when its over the love was
    never real so get over it and move on , this poem shows
    alot of pain and resentment which is what you get from
    getting done wrong.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Zombie

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    My god... I just love this so much... I can't even explain how much... this is wonderful! A great work! And all these feelings- hatred, sadness... everything... it just took over me... great!!! This is my fav of yours from now on...

    I really want to see something more like this... wonderful... I think I could read it again and again... just perfect!
    Perfection is non-existant.
    Thanks, I felt like I died when I wrote it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Daniel219 View Post
    Auch, zombies!!

    Interesting topic. The walking dead. Mind you, I've known people who wouldn't even rate that high on the intelligence scale, but that's another topic...

    Now where did I but my gun collection...

    Funny you mention intelligence. See, maybe humans see zombiez as brainless monsters.
    But maybe its not the brain thats missing at all. I love zombies.
    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    sweet poem and it so full of hate
    and despisement , and ont many people
    understand what it means to have an
    extiguished soul because they only play
    at love.

    when it come to love and having it killed
    or smotherd you feel empty and you need
    something to feel that void so you fill it
    with the only thing available which is hate
    and mistrust.

    and anyone that says there nothing to grasp
    on to when your passion is stamped out like a flame
    has never really experinced true love becuase there is
    always something to grasp be hate , malice , or that
    blood lust that drives people to vengence , there will
    always be things to grasp if there was true love.

    if you cant find anything when its over the love was
    never real so get over it and move on , this poem shows
    alot of pain and resentment which is what you get from
    getting done wrong.
    Proving to me, once again. That you can grasp the meaning behind the meaning.
    What you say is so true, that I want to cry.
    But, what kind of zombie sheds a tear?
    Last edited by Peach_follows; Jul 31, 2007 at 01:11 PM.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Zombie

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Perfection is non-existant.
    Thanks, I felt like I died when I wrote it.
    Now was that a big doze of good sarcasm? Don't blame me for liking it so much... I call everything that I can't find anything wrong in- perfect... Perfection exists as long as you don't always ask for more...

    I' m sad to hear you saying "I felt like I died when I wrote it", but I think I know how that feels and the next day I usually try to think: "At least there' s something good from me being sad, angry etc."

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Zombie

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Now was that a big doze of good sarcasm? Don't blame me for liking it so much... I call everything that I can't find anything wrong in- perfect... Perfection exists as long as you don't always ask for more...

    I' m sad to hear you saying "I felt like I died when I wrote it", but I think I know how that feels and the next day I usually try to think: "At least there' s something good from me being sad, angry etc."
    Perfection exsists as long as you don't always ask for more....
    Thats an interesting way to look at things.

    And feeling dead is what this poem called for. I guess it came on strong, because I was taking many of my personal emotions... and wrapping them up inside a fictional character. Since the character is "the walking dead", So was I. The real challenge wasn't the poem, but feeling alive after writing it.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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