Thread: The Ink Joint

Could I have a link to the fanfic?

Originally Posted by Kasai

Could I have a link to the fanfic?

Certainly. Here it is. This will put you at the first chapter.

Thought I'd let you guys know, I'm trying to tweak the Eva fanfic "Tough", so its more romantic comedy than the dark tragedy it started becoming. I have a habit of writing that way that I just can't break. I'd like some ideas, though, for character and plot development.

In the story, Asuka, Rei, and Shinji are set up on dates by a class lottery held (thanks to Toji and Kensuke, of course). I already have Rei and Shinji's dates and how those will work out planned. What I need to figure out, though, is how to approach Asuka's date.

The character she's stuck with (stuck is the best way to describe it) is an overachieving nerd, who worships the ground she walks on, but doesn't know how to express his love in a healthy manner. I was thinking of having him start fasting for days on end, bowing to her like a false idol, and showering her with completely inappropriate, useless gifts (imagine Asuka receiving a few books on the Germanic tribes of the Dark Ages, or medieval torture devices).

What I can't figure out, though, is how the dialogue and his actions will proceed to lead up to this stuff. Any suggestions would be appropriate.

Not much into creative ideas, but to see others making things make me somewhat glad to be a part of AO even more. I haven't been active much of late and I can't seem to find my white light for the time being. Till I do, I'll be somewhat less energetic...

I need a change of air...bleh.

Toecutter, your idea is nice indeed (just watched NGE for the 3rd time) and Asuka having an admirer could lead to great...or not so great things, would be fun if she could find her true love somehow...bleh, for the nerdy guy to approach Asuka in a not too dangerous manner is indeed a concept hard to grasp, I guess the nerd would need some kind of revelation to start everything up...hope that helps cause that's all your getting out of me tonight


I hope this clan will grow...

cya all for now

I need to make a few workouts that do not pertain to essays it seems.

You were saying? This will be to make up the essay I did not complete during my class and that might just make me not pass the course....bad me....

Well, essays are alright, but those require being studious outside of class. While I am more than happy to write an essay on politics, no one probably wants to read that stuff. It gets too old too fast.