Beyond the Bounds

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Feb 01, 2007, 04:36 AM

As night fall's and the wind
blows i hear screams from
soul's bound by rule's distraction's
and uncertainty.

The tear's of a thousand
empty soul's call out as the
world seems to be dieing, crying
out for angel's to save the world
they know.

Beyond the bounds people
wish to go ,no more headaches
no more tear's ,no more doubt
or troubled fears.

Things just seem so empty
on the inside ,when the boundaries
are directed and the free will left to die
there are no boundary's to the life that i want.

BlueFox1 · Mar 03, 2007, 01:53 PM

Didn't know you submitted a poem bro! I like your style in this one and your spelling is still improving! Keep up the good work Bro!

darkness of an angel · Mar 04, 2007, 01:01 PM

cool poem.
I loved it
good work
^_^ read my poem in the poem forum

CherryBlossom18 · Mar 18, 2007, 02:04 AM

I really liked your poem. Very interesting and insightfull. Great job sweetie.

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 24, 2007, 03:25 AM

Didn't know you were good at this them, Chris. It catchy. Hope to see you enter next time ^_^

Feb 01, 2007, 04:36 AM	#1 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,797 Thanks: 21 Thanked 21 Times in 20 Posts Credits: 3,320	Beyond the Bounds As night fall's and the wind blows i hear screams from soul's bound by rule's distraction's and uncertainty. The tear's of a thousand empty soul's call out as the world seems to be dieing, crying out for angel's to save the world they know. Beyond the bounds people wish to go ,no more headaches no more tear's ,no more doubt or troubled fears. Things just seem so empty on the inside ,when the boundaries are directed and the free will left to die there are no boundary's to the life that i want. __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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Mar 03, 2007, 01:53 PM	#2 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: Beyond the Bounds Didn't know you submitted a poem bro! I like your style in this one and your spelling is still improving! Keep up the good work Bro! __________________
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Mar 04, 2007, 01:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
darkness of an angel Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: I'm everywhere Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 652	Re: Beyond the Bounds cool poem. I loved it good work ^_^ read my poem in the poem forum
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Mar 18, 2007, 02:04 AM	#4 (permalink)
CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,396	Re: Beyond the Bounds I really liked your poem. Very interesting and insightfull. Great job sweetie. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Mar 24, 2007, 03:25 AM	#5 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,314 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,871	Re: Beyond the Bounds Didn't know you were good at this them, Chris. It catchy. Hope to see you enter next time ^_^ __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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