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    Beyond the Bounds

    As night fall's and the wind
    blows i hear screams from
    soul's bound by rule's distraction's
    and uncertainty.

    The tear's of a thousand
    empty soul's call out as the
    world seems to be dieing, crying
    out for angel's to save the world
    they know.

    Beyond the bounds people
    wish to go ,no more headaches
    no more tear's ,no more doubt
    or troubled fears.

    Things just seem so empty
    on the inside ,when the boundaries
    are directed and the free will left to die
    there are no boundary's to the life that i want.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Didn't know you submitted a poem bro! I like your style in this one and your spelling is still improving! Keep up the good work Bro!

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    cool poem.
    I loved it
    good work
    ^_^ read my poem in the poem forum

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    I really liked your poem. Very interesting and insightfull. Great job sweetie.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Didn't know you were good at this them, Chris. It catchy. Hope to see you enter next time ^_^

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