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    Beyond the Bounds

    Beyond the Bounds.

    Beyond the bounds of life.

    People often ask why.

    Why there is a such thing as life?

    Ask why is there limits to what I can do?

    The bounds… the bounds are they just there?

    But there’s got to be a reason why?

    I need to get beyond my bounds.

    But how is it possible?

    How can I work harder than I ever have?

    But wait there’s got to be a reason why I need to do this right?

    To get beyond my bounds.

    I must ... I must not let it bet me.

    I’m doing this for the woman I love.

    Nothing more nothing less.

    just for the woman i love.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Sounds like a very good and romantic love poem. Great job and I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    C'est tres romantique.

    Try using some complex words, okay? ^_^ Otherwise it's really good.
    Bravo

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