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    Beyond the Bounds

    Beyond the Bounds

    With each step they take
    Will their bodies break?

    The price of fame and a legend’s place
    Failure leading to abandon and disgrace

    The pressure to avoid such a fate
    All seek for the cut to make

    Most strive harder and harder
    Some their souls’ they even barter

    Fearing the crowd’s wail
    If their actions fail

    Not knowing the opportunity at atonement
    Or if they will even get that moment

    Better not left to chance
    Hoping not for that circumstance

    They push ever farther
    Lustrous dreams they harbor

    All for the ultimate praise
    How the stakes each time raise

    Success requires actions
    That gives the fan’s satisfaction

    To hear the crowd’s rarest sounds
    All must push beyond the bounds

    To a place of no limits
    Actions we only in our dreams can mimic.

    That place Beyond the Bounds.
    ~BCM~
    Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Mar 15, 2007 at 05:50 AM.


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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Very nice poem it sounds like a reaction from a rock concert. Great job.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Aww man. Now I feel bad that I missed yours It's good, and it seems you can do anything
    Well done ^_^

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