Very nice poem it sounds like a reaction from a rock concert. Great job.
Beyond the Bounds
With each step they take
Will their bodies break?
The price of fame and a legend’s place
Failure leading to abandon and disgrace
The pressure to avoid such a fate
All seek for the cut to make
Most strive harder and harder
Some their souls’ they even barter
Fearing the crowd’s wail
If their actions fail
Not knowing the opportunity at atonement
Or if they will even get that moment
Better not left to chance
Hoping not for that circumstance
They push ever farther
Lustrous dreams they harbor
All for the ultimate praise
How the stakes each time raise
Success requires actions
That gives the fan’s satisfaction
To hear the crowd’s rarest sounds
All must push beyond the bounds
To a place of no limits
Actions we only in our dreams can mimic.
That place Beyond the Bounds.
~BCM~
Last edited by Chiefblackhammer; Mar 15, 2007 at 05:50 AM.
Very nice poem it sounds like a reaction from a rock concert. Great job.
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Aww man. Now I feel bad that I missed yoursIt's good, and it seems you can do anything
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