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![]() ![]() Credits: 26,341 | Beyond the Bounds Beyond the Bounds With each step they take Will their bodies break? The price of fame and a legend’s place Failure leading to abandon and disgrace The pressure to avoid such a fate All seek for the cut to make Most strive harder and harder Some their souls’ they even barter Fearing the crowd’s wail If their actions fail Not knowing the opportunity at atonement Or if they will even get that moment Better not left to chance Hoping not for that circumstance They push ever farther Lustrous dreams they harbor All for the ultimate praise How the stakes each time raise Success requires actions That gives the fan’s satisfaction To hear the crowd’s rarest sounds All must push beyond the bounds To a place of no limits Actions we only in our dreams can mimic. That place Beyond the Bounds. ~BCM~
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,396 | Re: Beyond the Bounds Very nice poem it sounds like a reaction from a rock concert. Great job.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,871 | Re: Beyond the Bounds Aww man. Now I feel bad that I missed yours It's good, and it seems you can do anything ![]() Well done ^_^
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