shinopious

Hey... I hope my first line doesn't disqualify me haha! I was really feeling it when I wrote the poem so I just had to start it with that word on a line of it's own! In any case I really hope I am putting this in the correct spot! Thank you for your time and for reading my poem XD! Here it is...

Released...
from my self,
from my mind
off the shelf
away from mankind

I can feel the hurt,
I can feel the pain.
But only on the inside,
I think I'm going insane.

I am beyond the bounds,
of this physical world.
I can hear the screams,
as we're tossed,
and we're twirled.

Life passes by,
as I sit and watch.
I just want to die.
The pain ups a notch.

I'm so far gone now,
there's no coming back.
I am beyond the bounds...
I don't want to come back.

Well!! That is it! I hope you enjoyed it! It came directly from my heart and soul... again... thank you!

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So it is better to stay quiet and people think you are dumb, than to speak and people know you are dumb.

CherryBlossom18

Very good poem your heart and soul really shined through in it. You should be proud of yourself.

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Thanks so much I love it!

Rave_Grip

I especially like the last paragraph - no turning back. ^^ It's worth reading!

Edit
1,700th post XD w00t

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