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    Beyond the Bounds

    Hey... I hope my first line doesn't disqualify me haha! I was really feeling it when I wrote the poem so I just had to start it with that word on a line of it's own! In any case I really hope I am putting this in the correct spot! Thank you for your time and for reading my poem XD! Here it is...

    Released...
    from my self,
    from my mind
    off the shelf
    away from mankind

    I can feel the hurt,
    I can feel the pain.
    But only on the inside,
    I think I'm going insane.

    I am beyond the bounds,
    of this physical world.
    I can hear the screams,
    as we're tossed,
    and we're twirled.

    Life passes by,
    as I sit and watch.
    I just want to die.
    The pain ups a notch.

    I'm so far gone now,
    there's no coming back.
    I am beyond the bounds...
    I don't want to come back.

    Well!! That is it! I hope you enjoyed it! It came directly from my heart and soul... again... thank you!
    When in doubt, shut you mouth.
    Stupidity shows when you talk too much.
    So it is better to stay quiet and people think you are dumb, than to speak and people know you are dumb.

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Very good poem your heart and soul really shined through in it. You should be proud of yourself.
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    I especially like the last paragraph - no turning back. ^^ It's worth reading!

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