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    Beyond the Bounds

    Mr. Gluttonous pulls over,
    Miss. Enigmatic jumps in.
    He smiles cuz' his misses dosn't know,
    She smiles cuz' he's so dim.

    He stops in an alley,
    Then asks her to get it out.
    She does so glady,
    Then pulls the trigger without doubt.

    Mr. Gluttonous now stains his trunk,
    Miss. Enigmatic's purse full of deciet.
    The wife walks from the shadows,
    That guy was such a cheat.

    He crossed the line with his greed,
    Beyond the bounds of a fool.
    Mrs. Gluttonous is now Miss. Content,
    For Miss. Enigmatic was really Miss. Tool.

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    OOOOOOOO

    o.o Badness.

    A Different sound Miss. Kerry. ^^

    I like the set up though the whole poem!
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Good poem although it sounded kinda dirty which is ok.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Took me a while to figure it out and it was confusing, but still no mistakes.

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