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    Beyond the Bounds

    Don't know if this is late or not but here goes my attempt at poetry. I apologize in advance if its not that good, I tried my best, .

    Beyond the Bounds:

    Time has made hope seem like a distant star,
    Out of reach to those who suffer.
    Feelings of nothingness begin to surface,
    Time has seemed to pass you by.

    The time has come for you to stand,
    Rise above the blockades before you.
    Look to the future and what awaits you,
    No longer is there time to dream or sulk.

    No longer is there time for hope,
    One must create their own fate.
    Believe in yourself and in what you do,
    The time will come for you to shine.

    Throw away your false hope and your dark past,
    Now is the time for you to grasp every moment.

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    You have nothing to worry about it was a very good poem.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    It's short but good. It doesn't matter, keep working and put emotions ^_^
    I like it.

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