Beyond the Bounds

deodaclan18 · Feb 28, 2007, 02:33 PM

Don't know if this is late or not but here goes my attempt at poetry. I apologize in advance if its not that good, I tried my best,

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Beyond the Bounds:

Time has made hope seem like a distant star,
Out of reach to those who suffer.
Feelings of nothingness begin to surface,
Time has seemed to pass you by.

The time has come for you to stand,
Rise above the blockades before you.
Look to the future and what awaits you,
No longer is there time to dream or sulk.

No longer is there time for hope,
One must create their own fate.
Believe in yourself and in what you do,
The time will come for you to shine.

Throw away your false hope and your dark past,
Now is the time for you to grasp every moment.

CherryBlossom18 · Mar 18, 2007, 02:22 AM

You have nothing to worry about it was a very good poem.

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 24, 2007, 03:40 AM

It's short but good. It doesn't matter, keep working and put emotions ^_^
I like it.

Feb 28, 2007, 02:33 PM	#1 (permalink)
deodaclan18 Moderator Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 1,086 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 2,768	Beyond the Bounds Don't know if this is late or not but here goes my attempt at poetry. I apologize in advance if its not that good, I tried my best, . Beyond the Bounds: Time has made hope seem like a distant star, Out of reach to those who suffer. Feelings of nothingness begin to surface, Time has seemed to pass you by. The time has come for you to stand, Rise above the blockades before you. Look to the future and what awaits you, No longer is there time to dream or sulk. No longer is there time for hope, One must create their own fate. Believe in yourself and in what you do, The time will come for you to shine. Throw away your false hope and your dark past, Now is the time for you to grasp every moment.
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Mar 18, 2007, 02:22 AM	#2 (permalink)
CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,176	Re: Beyond the Bounds You have nothing to worry about it was a very good poem. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Mar 24, 2007, 03:40 AM	#3 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,313 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,478	Re: Beyond the Bounds It's short but good. It doesn't matter, keep working and put emotions ^_^ I like it. __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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