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 Credits: 14,478 | Beyond the bounds I told Soldat that i did not have the time and showed him my poem. So here it is anyways... We might have the strength and potential To make this world a better place than hell To remove poverty Suffering. Pain and agony But what we lack is the inner strength The power, the light that guides us throughout our lives When we look inside ourselves That is when we truly travel beyond the bounds What I found was beyond belief Something as simple as a flower Could be so elegant, so warm and so beautiful I looked beyond the horizon and it wasn’t heaven, neither hell Stepping out of the darkness Chilled air smoothly caressed my face Hoping the numb illusion could replace her touch But alas, I was too far away Beyond my comprehension I felt, and somehow lifting up with the wind Watching my flower shed pearly tears from her eyes Her elegance turning lifeless dry All that's left is the anticipation of the familiar warmth and love. My life has no round corners now, no value The sleep slowly crawls on me like an icy cold blanket The anxieties making me open my eyes, hoping not another illusion, I opened my eyes. And the icy wind no more, all there is, is her love wrapped around me I realized what I was truly missing. The light in the darkness uninhibited by evil Now I truly understand how it is like to Lose and get to live your life again.
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Mar 04, 2007, 11:31 AM
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Credits: 397 | Re: Beyond the bounds wow, i have no words to explain, and thats a good thing. thats a really good poem Rave!
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Mar 08, 2007, 02:36 AM
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Mar 18, 2007, 02:14 AM
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Credits: 2,176 | Re: Beyond the bounds Very good poem I liked it alot. It bought some of the feelings you had while writting it come to life. Great job.
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