Thread: Beyond the bounds

wow, i have no words to explain, and thats a good thing. thats a really good poem Rave!

Originally Posted by Rave_Grip

I told Soldat that i did not have the time and showed him my poem. So here it is anyways...

We might have the strength and potential
To make this world a better place than hell
To remove poverty
Suffering. Pain and agony

But what we lack is the inner strength
The power, the light that guides us throughout our lives
When we look inside ourselves
That is when we truly travel beyond the bounds

What I found was beyond belief
Something as simple as a flower
Could be so elegant, so warm and so beautiful
I looked beyond the horizon and it wasn’t heaven, neither hell

Stepping out of the darkness
Chilled air smoothly caressed my face
Hoping the numb illusion could replace her touch
But alas, I was too far away

Beyond my comprehension I felt, and somehow lifting up with the wind
Watching my flower shed pearly tears from her eyes
Her elegance turning lifeless dry
All that's left is the anticipation of the familiar warmth and love.

My life has no round corners now, no value
The sleep slowly crawls on me like an icy cold blanket
The anxieties making me open my eyes, hoping not another illusion,
I opened my eyes. And the icy wind no more, all there is, is her love wrapped around me

I realized what I was truly missing.
The light in the darkness uninhibited by evil
Now I truly understand how it is like to
Lose and get to live your life again.

Truly an awesome poem Rave! I glad I got the chance to compete against you bro in the POTM contest and I look forward to competing against you again! Keep up the good work bro!

Very good poem I liked it alot. It bought some of the feelings you had while writting it come to life. Great job.