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    Beyond the bounds

    I told Soldat that i did not have the time and showed him my poem. So here it is anyways...

    We might have the strength and potential
    To make this world a better place than hell
    To remove poverty
    Suffering. Pain and agony

    But what we lack is the inner strength
    The power, the light that guides us throughout our lives
    When we look inside ourselves
    That is when we truly travel beyond the bounds

    What I found was beyond belief
    Something as simple as a flower
    Could be so elegant, so warm and so beautiful
    I looked beyond the horizon and it wasn’t heaven, neither hell

    Stepping out of the darkness
    Chilled air smoothly caressed my face
    Hoping the numb illusion could replace her touch
    But alas, I was too far away

    Beyond my comprehension I felt, and somehow lifting up with the wind
    Watching my flower shed pearly tears from her eyes
    Her elegance turning lifeless dry
    All that's left is the anticipation of the familiar warmth and love.

    My life has no round corners now, no value
    The sleep slowly crawls on me like an icy cold blanket
    The anxieties making me open my eyes, hoping not another illusion,
    I opened my eyes. And the icy wind no more, all there is, is her love wrapped around me

    I realized what I was truly missing.
    The light in the darkness uninhibited by evil
    Now I truly understand how it is like to
    Lose and get to live your life again.
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    Re: Beyond the bounds

    wow, i have no words to explain, and thats a good thing. thats a really good poem Rave!
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    Re: Beyond the bounds

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    I told Soldat that i did not have the time and showed him my poem. So here it is anyways...

    We might have the strength and potential
    To make this world a better place than hell
    To remove poverty
    Suffering. Pain and agony

    But what we lack is the inner strength
    The power, the light that guides us throughout our lives
    When we look inside ourselves
    That is when we truly travel beyond the bounds

    What I found was beyond belief
    Something as simple as a flower
    Could be so elegant, so warm and so beautiful
    I looked beyond the horizon and it wasn’t heaven, neither hell

    Stepping out of the darkness
    Chilled air smoothly caressed my face
    Hoping the numb illusion could replace her touch
    But alas, I was too far away

    Beyond my comprehension I felt, and somehow lifting up with the wind
    Watching my flower shed pearly tears from her eyes
    Her elegance turning lifeless dry
    All that's left is the anticipation of the familiar warmth and love.

    My life has no round corners now, no value
    The sleep slowly crawls on me like an icy cold blanket
    The anxieties making me open my eyes, hoping not another illusion,
    I opened my eyes. And the icy wind no more, all there is, is her love wrapped around me

    I realized what I was truly missing.
    The light in the darkness uninhibited by evil
    Now I truly understand how it is like to
    Lose and get to live your life again.
    Truly an awesome poem Rave! I glad I got the chance to compete against you bro in the POTM contest and I look forward to competing against you again! Keep up the good work bro!

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    Re: Beyond the bounds

    Very good poem I liked it alot. It bought some of the feelings you had while writting it come to life. Great job.
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