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    Beyond the Bounds

    Beyond the Bounds

    The scared, panicky feeling you get when your all alone in the dark,
    the tingling, numbness when you just don't quite feel safe.
    The relaxing, nurturing feeling you long for when something goes horribly wrong,
    The thing you feel you fear the most but yet are not aware.

    That certain time of night when your about to fall asleep,
    that your awakened by a sound that was never really caused.
    When at home in your bed where everything feels at peace,
    it is right there beside you, never able to escape from it.

    The Darkness that lingers forever in your soul,
    to be concieled, held back, and withdrawn from sight.
    The true you that you hate and wish away,
    the you that will never turn and leave you be.

    The "other side" of the mirror,
    the reflection that will never fade,
    the one who is loved and hated,
    the one who is most betrayed,
    is it them, or is it you,
    that is that Demon Within

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    (sorry for the double post) i just read down the post for the contest more when i saw there were no other posts here and saw that the deadline was the end of Feb. Sorry for the late post, i didnt realize i had missed the end of the contest. well, even thought it doesnt count, i hope you enjoy the poem anyways.

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    Very good poem it tells such a great story. I could see things happening as I read it. I look forward to reading more.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds

    The un tapped poet eh. Well I like it, excellent work ^_^ You did a good job! Interesting subject matter as well :3

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