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    Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest)

    Beyond the Bounds

    I dream of a world
    Beyond that of what I know,
    From the depths of the oceans
    To the mountains capped with snow.
    Within those dreams
    I am able to see
    What life would be like
    If from these bindings I was free.

    I feel lost,
    I feel trapped,
    My spirit spent,
    My power tapped,
    But most of all
    I feel unsure,
    For I know my binds are not
    What once they were.

    What is it exactly
    That now has me bound?
    I'll tell you once I know,
    The answer is not yet found.




    (Note : I generally do not write poetry, so I apologize if this is bad and you feel it was a waste of your time to read m(_ _)m ~)
    Wo shi zhen zhen zhen xi huan ni...

    Thank you Equinn!! ^-^

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest)

    o_o Wow Mahiru, I never peg you to sound like this. More of a cheerful poem, but very thought in it. ^^

    Nice!
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest)

    I hope you win the contest cause it is very good and insightfull.
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest)

    Pas mal. Insightful and worth reading, glad you took part

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