Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest)

mahiru · Feb 25, 2007, 07:56 AM

Beyond the Bounds

I dream of a world
Beyond that of what I know,
From the depths of the oceans
To the mountains capped with snow.
Within those dreams
I am able to see
What life would be like
If from these bindings I was free.

I feel lost,
I feel trapped,
My spirit spent,
My power tapped,
But most of all
I feel unsure,
For I know my binds are not
What once they were.

What is it exactly
That now has me bound?
I'll tell you once I know,
The answer is not yet found.

(Note : I generally do not write poetry, so I apologize if this is bad and you feel it was a waste of your time to read m(_ _)m ~)

*Mr. K* · Mar 03, 2007, 01:50 PM

o_o Wow Mahiru, I never peg you to sound like this. More of a cheerful poem, but very thought in it. ^^

Nice!

CherryBlossom18 · Mar 18, 2007, 02:17 AM

I hope you win the contest cause it is very good and insightfull.

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 24, 2007, 03:42 AM

Pas mal. Insightful and worth reading, glad you took part

Feb 25, 2007, 07:56 AM	#1 (permalink)
mahiru Wo chao xi huan ni Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: USA Posts: 766 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,028	Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest) Beyond the Bounds I dream of a world Beyond that of what I know, From the depths of the oceans To the mountains capped with snow. Within those dreams I am able to see What life would be like If from these bindings I was free. I feel lost, I feel trapped, My spirit spent, My power tapped, But most of all I feel unsure, For I know my binds are not What once they were. What is it exactly That now has me bound? I'll tell you once I know, The answer is not yet found. (Note : I generally do not write poetry, so I apologize if this is bad and you feel it was a waste of your time to read m(_ _)m ~) __________________ Wo shi zhen zhen zhen xi huan ni... Thank you Equinn!! ^-^
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Mar 03, 2007, 01:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,257 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,682	Re: Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest) o_o Wow Mahiru, I never peg you to sound like this. More of a cheerful poem, but very thought in it. ^^ Nice! __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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Mar 18, 2007, 02:17 AM	#3 (permalink)
CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,176	Re: Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest) I hope you win the contest cause it is very good and insightfull. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Mar 24, 2007, 03:42 AM	#4 (permalink)
Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,313 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,478	Re: Beyond the Bounds (Entry for Contest) Pas mal. Insightful and worth reading, glad you took part __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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