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    Beyond the bounds of Life

    Beyond the bounds of Life


    In this world full of relentless loves and hates,
    We struggle to survive each trial and tribulation.
    Never knowing what obstacles will impede us,
    Striving to achieve and go beyond the bounds.

    Beginning to learn about what life has to offer,
    Our minds begin to formulate a predestined plan.
    A world full of new opportunity begins to unfurl,
    Each person is given a glimpse beyond the bounds.

    Learning that love and pain is a part of the big plan,
    We start to search for that perfect person in our lives.
    Shrouded in the world’s uncertain mysteries of torment,
    Our hearts allow us to excel and go beyond the bounds.

    Now knowing what lies ahead on our destined paths,
    Everyone begins the struggle to survive and succeed.
    For now it is no longer and internal battle in the mind,
    The battle is for each person to beyond his/her bounds.

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    Re: Beyond the bounds of Life

    Very good bro I really liked it. I could imagine what was happening as I read it. I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Beyond the bounds of Life

    Hopefully I will come up with something soon! Thanks for the awesome comment Sis! I'm glad you liked it!:thumb

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    Re: Beyond the bounds of Life

    As expected from Blue Fox. Really good. Interesting? Yes.
    Captitalization is good as well.

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