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    Beyond the Bounds-NejiIsHuggable

    Beyond the Bounds- NejiIsHuggable

    She's Angry with me again.
    I hung out with them again.
    I'm told their hangout is off-limits.
    I still go.
    Beyond the bounds they wait.
    They wait for the children.
    Hurt, Crying out, and Scared.
    In the Shadowy woods they protect them.
    They teach them to take care of themselves.
    As the children learn they run.
    and they run beyond the bounds to where their parent can't hurt them.

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds-NejiIsHuggable

    It sounds like a poem about some of the things teens go through whenever they run away from home,but it's a good poem.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
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    Re: Beyond the Bounds-NejiIsHuggable

    yeah it does doesn't it. but sometimes running away makes things worse *sigh*

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds-NejiIsHuggable

    Kinda of different from what I expected. And by the title I thought it was about Neiji being huggable XD
    It's true, the poem.

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds-NejiIsHuggable

    Quote Originally Posted by Rave_Grip View Post
    Kinda of different from what I expected. And by the title I thought it was about Neiji being huggable XD
    It's true, the poem.
    lol i AM huggable ask my skool friends lol.
    ^^ hehe

    Neji hates when i hug other people.......
    he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....

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    Re: Beyond the Bounds-NejiIsHuggable

    i like the title. Way to draw the eye. the poem is good really deep i like it. if only i understood it more.
    every rose has a thorn

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