!flaminghate

I say someday
That I shall go
beyond the bounds,
Of my limits to go to the top
Of Mount Everest,
With the wind in my hair,
And the sun in my face.

Reaching the blue
Of the sky
With my heart,
To the top of Mount Everest,
With the wind in my hair,
And the sun in my face.
I'm going to go beyond the bounds of my physical and mental limits.

darkness of an angel

You know flaminghate,
you could have done better,
this poem is alright,
good work.

nightmaregirl

I agree with darkness of an angel
you could have done better,
but you've done your best.
good work on effort.

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BlueFox1

Flaminghate keep up the good work and I look forward to competing against you again in the near future!

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!flaminghate

me too
BlueFox1,
I'll do my best next time
hey Blue,
can I add you to my network?
I just have girls ^^;;
well I don't mind them.

BlueFox1

Sure flaminghate! I would be honored to be added to your network!

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hellknight

Okay before we go off topic, you got a good poem going on and it sound really good lol. hope to read more in the future.

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sazza2488

Well done flaming. This is a very good poem. Keep up the good work.