On the Mountain Top

!flaminghate · Feb 28, 2007, 04:53 PM

I say someday
That I shall go
beyond the bounds,
Of my limits to go to the top
Of Mount Everest,
With the wind in my hair,
And the sun in my face.

Reaching the blue
Of the sky
With my heart,
To the top of Mount Everest,
With the wind in my hair,
And the sun in my face.
I'm going to go beyond the bounds of my physical and mental limits.

darkness of an angel · Mar 04, 2007, 01:02 PM

You know flaminghate,
you could have done better,
this poem is alright,
good work.

nightmaregirl · Mar 04, 2007, 11:33 PM

I agree with darkness of an angel
you could have done better,
but you've done your best.

good work on effort.

BlueFox1 · Mar 08, 2007, 02:39 AM

Flaminghate keep up the good work and I look forward to competing against you again in the near future!

!flaminghate · Mar 08, 2007, 02:42 AM

me too
BlueFox1,
I'll do my best next time

hey Blue,
can I add you to my network?
I just have girls ^^;;
well I don't mind them.

BlueFox1 · Mar 08, 2007, 04:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by flaminghate

me too
BlueFox1,
I'll do my best next time

hey Blue,
can I add you to my network?
I just have girls ^^;;
well I don't mind them.

Sure flaminghate! I would be honored to be added to your network!

*hellknight* · Mar 08, 2007, 09:49 AM

Okay before we go off topic, you got a good poem going on and it sound really good lol. hope to read more in the future.

sazza2488 · Mar 08, 2007, 10:37 AM

Well done flaming. This is a very good poem. Keep up the good work.

!flaminghate · Mar 08, 2007, 10:48 AM

I'm glad you guys like my poem^_^
I love you all.

CherryBlossom18 · Mar 18, 2007, 02:09 AM

Very good poem it sounds like you wanna climb Mount Everest. I hope you get to someday just please be carefull I wouldn't want you to get hurt eventhough I don't know you. I look forward to you next one.

*Rave_Grip* · Mar 24, 2007, 03:47 AM

I thought it would be a long tiem as the poem suggested, but it's still very thoughtfull of you to come up with this idea, which I really like. I love it.

Feb 28, 2007, 04:53 PM	#1 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	On the Mountain Top I say someday That I shall go beyond the bounds, Of my limits to go to the top Of Mount Everest, With the wind in my hair, And the sun in my face. Reaching the blue Of the sky With my heart, To the top of Mount Everest, With the wind in my hair, And the sun in my face. I'm going to go beyond the bounds of my physical and mental limits.
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Mar 04, 2007, 01:02 PM	#2 (permalink)
darkness of an angel Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: I'm everywhere Posts: 58 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 652	Re: On the Mountain Top You know flaminghate, you could have done better, this poem is alright, good work.
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Mar 04, 2007, 11:33 PM	#3 (permalink)
nightmaregirl Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: On the Mountain Top I agree with darkness of an angel you could have done better, but you've done your best. good work on effort. __________________
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,156	Re: On the Mountain Top Flaminghate keep up the good work and I look forward to competing against you again in the near future! __________________
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!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Re: On the Mountain Top me too BlueFox1, I'll do my best next time hey Blue, can I add you to my network? I just have girls ^^;; well I don't mind them.
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hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,435 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 14,878	Re: On the Mountain Top Okay before we go off topic, you got a good poem going on and it sound really good lol. hope to read more in the future.
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Mar 08, 2007, 10:37 AM	#8 (permalink)
sazza2488 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: England, UK Posts: 139 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 359	Re: On the Mountain Top Well done flaming. This is a very good poem. Keep up the good work.
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!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Re: On the Mountain Top I'm glad you guys like my poem^_^ I love you all.
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,166	Re: On the Mountain Top Very good poem it sounds like you wanna climb Mount Everest. I hope you get to someday just please be carefull I wouldn't want you to get hurt eventhough I don't know you. I look forward to you next one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Rave_Grip I hate idiots on AO. Kill Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Life is an illusion. Posts: 2,313 Thanks: 0 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Credits: 14,467	Re: On the Mountain Top I thought it would be a long tiem as the poem suggested, but it's still very thoughtfull of you to come up with this idea, which I really like. I love it. __________________ Wherever you see, there is always 98% of people who love something; and 2% that don't. I'm pretty sure that not ALL 98% of peeps don't support Lolita or anything. So if you agree, put it in your sig. \| .:~My AO Gallery~:. \| \| .:~The AO Rules~:. \|
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