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![]() ![]() Credits: 10,300 | Beyond the Bounds The tips of my fingers so close to my palms. My hands, clenched in fists so tightly. My lashes so close to the top of my cheeks Tears separate them nightly. What if I come that close to losing The reason why I rise? The reason I have fists to fight Or vision in my eyes. The smell of my devotion Is so close to baby’s breath. The feel of life, so close to his skin In him exists no death. Love has a taste so close to his kiss Never too much to consume. So close to hearing angels sing When he came out of my womb. I thank the Lord every day, That we’re so close to one another. I always feel so close to God, When my son cries for his mother. To hear my child cry out for me, Its the most heavenly of sounds. I thought I was so close to heaven... ...Then he pushed me beyond the bounds .
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,146 | Re: So Close. That's such a sweet poem about how mothers feel about their children. I'm gonna feel the same way about mine whenever I have a baby.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,445 | Re: So Close. Awww. A very different theme and it really touched me. Great work ![]() Emotions = very good.
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