Thats good but in character description you also have to have what they look like (facial features).....besides that the rest is good.
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Thats good but in character description you also have to have what they look like (facial features).....besides that the rest is good.
Name: Jeff Agoto
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Race (Vampire or Human): Human
Clothing: Military spec digi-camo uniform, combat harness and Awol bag
Bio: Having finished his tour in Iraq, this recently discharged soldier has come home to the hills of the smoky mountains. To Galtinburg, a place he thought he would never come back to. He had turned to the Army to get him out of this small town and out to see the world. A series of increasingly odd letters he had receive from some old friends had peaked his curiosity. He took the first bus he could find from base to his old stomping grounds. His Awol bag with his things including a trophy gun in the form of a AK47 that he took off a dead insurgent and a few other things picked up during his tour in Iraq. He has seen death and dealt it with out a flinch, he is always thinking…
Character Description: Jeff is half Chinese and half Caucasian. He only speaks English and was raised in the area of the smokies. He has a few scars on his torso and arm from a road side bomb that got too close for comfort. He looks more like his father, with the thin slit of Chinese eyes, brown in color and the jet black hair.
He is naturally quiet and a bit of a lurker which helped him immensely in combat. His temper and emotions are kept in check with his strong personal will power, but his temper when released is a frightful sight to see.
I like him the first human beside me about time......Your character is approved.
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Originally Posted by Kiani Haki22
Good then your character is good to go.....can't wait to see him in action.
Name: Anna
Age: 16
Race: Human
Clothing: A short black dress with black hi-heel boots and wears a locket with pictures of her friends.
Bio: She was born as a rich spoiled little princess in , but one day her world came crashing down when her family was killed by a thief wanting money. All of her living members of her family were killed. She started traveling the world learning fighting with swords and bow and arrows, eventually becoming a mercanary.
Character Description: Shoulder length light red almost pink hair with bangs, dark yellow eyes, 5 feet tall natural white skin color and very shapely.
It meets the qualifications she is accepted.....welcome.
Name:agaki is wat he calls him self the other half calls him self agito
Age:15
Gender: male
Race:Vampire
Clothing:wears all black but prefurses a straitjacket if has one
Bio:agaki story is a confusing one,for he is a vampire with a split personaliy.It began when he was just a kid normal friends and family everything was fine until that faitfull night when he was bit by a vampire but thats not wat gave him a split personality it was the shock of killing his family with his own hands that made his mind twisted....that was when he appeard the side that drove him to do it the side that drives him to kill the side he for dear life trys to hold in.
Character Description:agaki is a fifteen year old who was turned into a vampire when he was a child and from the shock of being bit and of killing his own family was the reason for his split personality.After the killing he was ashamed of himself and ranaway from his home town looking for a place where he can get find help.During his search he heard of a mericle place near the smokey mountains and rushed his way over hopeing he will find a cure of some sort to save him.