
Originally Posted by
Ziosin
@Akaryu: The Zhweihander seems like an interesting weapon. I think Sinzio will let you have it. Try to clean up the little punctuation mistakes in your bio to make it a bit more understandable. You will also (like my character, who is Uchiha) start with Sharingan Cleft 1 upon acceptance.
@Zero666Mitaki: Read the rules. Sand village has not been unlocked yet, so your character MUST be from Konoha at the moment. Your bio includes a character that hasn't been introduced (Gaara). I believe this is a parallel kind of RP, and so most normal Naruto characters don't exist anyway. (Can someone clear that up if I'm wrong?). Also, none of us have jutsu mastery, and so you will only be able to use whatever jutsus you've been told you unlocked; which brings me to your clan. I don't think Mitaki is a normal Naruto clan, and is therefore unusable. Please change it.
Look at my Bio on the first page, or Renn's on the second for an example of a detailed Biography. Try to work on your character's past and present, rather than presenting us with an array of his abilities. This goes for you too, Akaryu.
@Grimmjow: Your bio is still abruptly short and badly made. Try using better grammar and more detail.
To All: The RP has been put on hold as of right now. I believe NPC's are being assigned to competent RPers. This should be over soon, and RP resumed.
And please try not to make your characters abnormally uber-powerful. My character is RPing a little more advanced in taijutsu with his swords (little less advanced in Ninjutsu, and ranged Taijutsu), simply because his solitary time spent in a hardcore orphanage, and Renn's character is slightly psychic because all the time she spent forced to be alone as a child. Your character isn't going to be winning every fight, and will possibly (small chance) die somewhere along the line in the story. We don't need to have shinobi who can knock out the main villain (at the time, it's Ryuzi Shinhai; AKA: Super-Powerful sword-shinobi who single-handedly killed the hokage) with their pinky toe. Refrain from making your character a monstrously super-powered hero. Please stop using words like "Prodigy", or "Carries a demon in him", or "Early Master". You get the picture.
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