Thread: Bleach - Tale of the 14th Division Squad

I'm interested in this. put up a charcter template and I'll join.

Originally Posted by Vincent

I'm interested in this. put up a charcter template and I'll join.

Name: Ashiko Muroski

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Rank: Must PM for rank there will be no Captain rank given out for there is only one Captain "Kyo" and no god moding: Pending.

Race: All most be shinigami no: Shinigami

Zanpakutō: A 15 inch black hilt and a 3 inch in diameter hand guard in silver color, the blade is 4'6" and blue swathed with black. It looks like blue marble with black veins running through it. There is an engraving on the side that spells out “Lightning.”

Shikai: He calls out “Kyuukyoku Handanryoku Raikou!” or Final Judgment of Lightning, and a great light erupts from his blade totally enveloping the battle field. It lets everyone know he has released. It also lets people know to stay away.

Bankai: PENDING (Per Chiefblackhammer)

Abilities: He is able to control and influence electricity. He can also control the electrical impulses in the body, thus controlling the nervous system of his enemies. He can over amplify their senses, making them extremely sensitive to any attacks or he can shutdown their system and cause them to lose all feeling. They are then not able to move because their muscle control is almost completely gone. He can make them attack themselves if he chooses. He can even read the impulses in their brain and read their moves before they do them. He can also use his powers to amplify his own abilities. He can bump up his muscles and power. But this takes a lot of Raitsu. Most of his abilities take major amounts of Raitsu. As a final attack, he can gather thunderclouds to call a huge lightning storm. He calls forth “Let this be your Final Judgment!” Then ten thousand lightning strikes come forth from the clouds to obliterate his enemies. This is his most powerful attack but it is very focused and can be dodged if you are fast enough. He is also very wide open for attack during this time.

Disabilities: His left arm is a bit slower in reaction time due to an injury from long ago. He is also more emotional than he should be. But that can be seen as an advantage because his true power is only released when his best friends or comrades are in great danger or close to death. Against his people with water powers, he can be overpowered. He can be overloaded by the water, thus electrocuting himself. His powers also take a lot of Raitsu and must be recharged, most times for at least 5 minutes. During this time his power is at least 1/3 of his normal level.

Bio: He joined the squad after his powers were found out by some menos that attacked his town. He tried to best to defend his home town but was too weak and was hurt. The shinigami then stepped in and saved him and then they looked after him. He was grateful to then and wanted to become stronger to protect those he loved. When he was training, he was very weak. It looked like he wouldn’t even make it to 3rd lieutenant. But then another menos attacked his town. His team was sent to deal with them. His family was hurt during the attack. As he was fighting to save them, his final power released and for the first time he did his Bankai. He dealt with all the menos by himself after that. As he progressed in training, his power grew to something that was unpredicted for him. It was thought he would be weak but he ended up becoming equal to the rank of 2nd lieutenant. He trains frequently in order to raise his power even more.


Yes, I added and changed around a bunch of stuff.

Name: Retlin Aenor

Age: 38

Height: 6ft 8in

Weight: 300

Gender: male

Appearance:

Race: Shinigami

rank: 3rd Lieutenant

Zanpakuto:tadaibareru (heavy barrel)

Shikai: holds sword in both hands and says "reach out and touch someone tadaibareru" to which the sword breaks into two http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/j...arthshaker.jpg, also armor plating covers the arms up to the shoulders allowing him to block swords if necessary. using riatsu, of which he has no short supply, he can shoot energy bullets through the gun. Differents amounts of riatsu mean different uses and destructive abilities. He is also able to manipulate the trajectory to a degree.

Bankai: PENDING (Per Chiefblackhammer)

Abilities with disabilities:
Has tried to master hand to hand and is extremely proficient in it, but he still tries to stay at range, needs to rely on his shoulder armor and guns to guard more effectivly against melee

can do shunpo to a degree that is said to be equal to Shihouin Yoruichi(Because of her personal training) but this takes large amounts of riatsu and is extrely unstable (could go 500ft or 50miles)and uses it for escape purposes only, because of this he sticks to what he has dubbed halfshun (half shunpo) a much weaker version which he can use to cover short distances 90-100yards instantly but is unable to use in succession and must wait 2 seconds after each halfshun.

is able to manipulate the elements into his gun with his riatsu creating different rounds for different effects. such as fire rounds(exploding) ice rounds(freezing) to name a few, but this takes a certain amount of concentration in shikai and he only uses it when he is at a range where he can focus on it for 2-4seconds.

can use kido but lacks experience, not to mention doesn't really want to use it, so will rarely if ever perform kido techniques, but when he does they are fairly powerful but does about half the amount of damage to him as it does to his enemy.

while using shikai or bankai, after using the 6 rounds from the chambers in quick succession he has to wait for his riatsu to recharge the cartriges, which depending on how much he used can be 15 seconds to one minute in shikai or 5 seconds to 30seconds in bankai. If he forces his riatsu into the gun to reload faster than normal he not only causes injury to himself but the shot he will use that riatsu for will use 150% more energy.

Bio: Retlin was an outcast from birth but was given a chance to show his worth to when he was given the chance to join the 13 court squads at the young age of 16. Quickly rising through the ranks of squad 11 with missions he nor his allies were supposed to survive. he was sent on a mission to hueco mundo as 2nd seat with 20 other shinigami on a secret mission at the age of 21, after returning as the sol survivor one year later with information that couldn't be dechyphered from the visual recorder. he was considered a casualty because he wouldn't respond to anything. so he was relieved of his duties and seat only to be sent to Unohana's squad for treatment to no avail, with Unohana classifying him as having 2 personalities. Cause unknown, she believes this is why he was the only survivor. After several attempts, against Retlin's explicit warnings, Capt. Unohana was unsuccessful at bringing out the 2nd persona leaving many questions unanswered, and the only thing Retlin would say was that Reltin his other personality was the complete opposite of him and that he would come out when needed.

One year after the attack on Karakura the information and visuals on the recorder were finally dechyphered and it was discovered that Retlin had fought heroicly and to the best of his ability against impossible odds, and even though he incured great damage to himself managed to escape. And over the years that had passed since his secret mission continually trained himself harder and harder as if obsessed with getting power for something only he could understand, often hiding his powers to escape the notice of higher ups.

A short time there after a representative of Kyoshu "Kyo" Mitsuhide found Retlin and explained the situtation to him. Retlin decided to go and join Kyoshu Mitsuhide, if needed, under one condition. "Give me my orders, get out of my way." Was all he would say to Mitsuhide with a huge smile. "Cause im a wild card."

*note* if this chara is to godly i apologize, this is my First RPG chara and i tried to not make him a god. Please pm me so that i may make adjustments to better suit the RPG. Thank you for understanding. *note*


Fixed some discrepancies in the timeline for my bio, and added a statement at the end of my bio.
Added appearance picture.

No one is to have a Bankai except the Captain and possibly the lieutenant (assuming walter wants him/her to have one). You cannot violate the laws of the series and only Captain level and a few lieutenants have Bankai.

Also Walter will assign all ranks in the group, there is 1 Captain, 1 Lieutenant (also known as second seat) and all other members will be given seat # ranking from 3rd to whatever with the smaller the number meaning the higher the rank.

Originally Posted by Chiefblackhammer

No one is to have a Bankai except the Captain and possibly the lieutenant (assuming walter wants him/her to have one). You cannot violate the laws of the series and only Captain level and a few lieutenants have Bankai.

Alright, no problem. I'm fine with that. I can wait for permission from you or him. Thanks.

Originally Posted by Chiefblackhammer

No one is to have a Bankai except the Captain and possibly the lieutenant (assuming walter wants him/her to have one). You cannot violate the laws of the series and only Captain level and a few lieutenants have Bankai.

i got cha, already asked walter about rank. but thanks for the heads up

I made a lot of changes to my character. Take a look at it now.

Name: Nichole Kavor

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Rank: 2nd seat

Race: Shinigami

Zanpakutō: raikou heki (Lightning burst) it is a little longer than a regular zanpakuto, its crossguard looks like two lightning blots crossing each other.

Shikai: "strike" raikou heki Nichole slices her zanpakuto through the air and a arc of lightning shots from the blade she can do this a total of ten times before she needs to recharge.

Bankai: Not yet acheived she is close and has meet all the requirments, but her zanpakuto is holding back until what raikou heki says is the right time

Abilites: Nichole is a excellent swordswoman and a considered a expert in it, but her kido abilites are low. She knows flash step and her spirutale persure his slightly higher than most. she is fast though her power hits is somthing to be desired. Her problem is that she dosent think just charges into battle without much controle so that leaves her in some tight postions some times

Bio: Nichole was a Rukon District kid until her elavated spirtual persure was noticed by a passing soul reaper. She was taken to the Academy were she trained. She was assigned to squad Six. When Nichole found out about the new squad she was one of the first to try and get in.