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    The Perfect Crime

    ((i hope i'm doing this right <.< correct meh if i'm wrong ))

    Large sprees of killings have been raging in the huge city of Jenex, by a Mysterious person in a mask. police are baffled all untill her last crime the killers face is shown. a Girl!Of the young age of 16. she had taken off her mask in front of a severance camera and looked directly into it, the news quickly spread around the large city.

    A Girl of the same age moved to this large city in scearch of a new start in life,after about a month in this 'new life' she has friends and everything she had ever wanted, but a day after the killers last crime she came to see this news report and was shocked to see her self on the screen.running to her friends for help they turn on her and didn't believe her. now police , Assassins and bounty hunters alike are after her for a mass amount of crimes she didn't commit.
    (we have powers in this rp, i will play the , she at least needs to have one or two friends that believe her. You can play some one thats after her too)
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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    Quote Originally Posted by Nova Inkheart View Post
    ((i hope i'm doing this right <.< correct meh if i'm wrong ))

    Large sprees of killings have been raging in the huge city of Jenex, by a Mysterious person in a mask. police are baffled all untill her last crime the killers face is shown. a !Of the young age of 16. she had taken off her mask in front of a severance camera and looked directly into it, the news quickly spread around the large city.

    A of the same age moved to this large city in scearch of a new start in life,after about a month in this 'new life' she has friends and everything she had ever wanted, but a day after the killers last crime she came to see this news report and was shocked to see her self on the screen.running to her friends for help they turn on her and didn't believe her. now police , Assassins and bounty hunters alike are after her for a mass amount of crimes she didn't commit.
    (we have powers in this rp, i will play the , she at least needs to have one or two friends that believe her. You can play some one thats after her too)
    Oi that sounds fun. if you git this started then i'm game.

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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    It seems like a good start. You might want to add some kind of character profile or something to give more details to the characters of the story. That way it is more easy to get into the atmosphere. An example being:

    Name:
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    Gender:
    Appearance:
    Personality:
    Abilities/powers:
    Bio: (background story of character)

    Just a thought. The description of your character seems nice and well thought.
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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    oh ok, i wasn't sure if i should post it, thanks

    Name: Hazle
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e1...csuntitled.jpg
    Personality: Hazle is sweet and kind, but she is also very strong. Hazle will not attack anyone unless they attack first, and even then she trys not to hurt them to badly
    Abilities/powers: Power over earth, and healing
    Bio: Hazle just moved to Jenex, and had a farly good life untill the killing sprees. She is on the run, not sure who to trust.
    Last edited by Nova Inkheart; May 19, 2007 at 02:14 PM.

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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    yeah i would like to help too so yeah hit me back on that idea

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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    The idea seems still quite rough, it needs to be more detailed. This Jenex, what is this place and could you further detail in, maybe comparing it to real places and then adding in the differences and particularities.

    Also, who are these people and bounty hunters or assassins more or less, can the people who join this RPG actually 'be' these organisations that are after the girl. Some would maybe be after her for darker reasons, I sense that there is more than can meet the eye in this story, which leads to questions and mysteries, which I find quite interesting, as long as you yourself know the truth behind it all, keeping it a secret until the time is right.


    So:

    1. What is Jenex?

    2. What can be the characters?

    3. Be certain to have a solid plot, if you are hesitant, you can always PM me some of the story so that it isn't spoiled for those who may join. I am the appointed moderator here and will not join this story, even if it is interesting enough. I may not be the best RPer around, but my imagination flows quite a lot and I have played quite in a few RPG's that had stories way beyound simple storylines.

    4. Please don't let this idea die, be perseverent, and have fun ^^
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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
    So:

    1. What is Jenex?

    2. What can be the characters?

    3. Be certain to have a solid plot, if you are hesitant, you can always PM me some of the story so that it isn't spoiled for those who may join. I am the appointed moderator here and will not join this story, even if it is interesting enough. I may not be the best RPer around, but my imagination flows quite a lot and I have played quite in a few RPG's that had stories way beyound simple storylines.

    4. Please don't let this idea die, be perseverent, and have fun ^^
    1. Jenex Is a large city, like new york with half the people, it has many small stores and also huge buildings for companys, it has mostly apartments, but there are a few houses on the border of the city. along with patches of forest here and there. Being like nWe york, Jenex has alot of dark allies, you never know what could be in them

    2.You can be anyone in the story, but not the but not the killer and/or the . you can be one of the s friends, or you can be a bounty hunter or a cop, anything you want.

    3. ok i might pm you.

    4. always

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    Re: The Perfect Crime

    I like the idea and I'm also thinking of a character for this, as a bounty hunter.

    I like join in, if this gets underway. It seems fun too.
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