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    Okay first RPG so ideas, Flames, etc. welcome.

    Humans have stolen the sacred text that has keep the Unseen world form tearing its self apart with war. Now its is a all out war against Humans, Demons, and Dirty Bloods (half-this, half-that be creative). Morden time, all of America is open.
    Help with anything else i am missing, especially combat.
    Guns basicly do jack shit, so no guns, if you absoultly have to have one the rules are, limited ammo, keep it at a pistol, and it takes one of you abilities because it has to be special made and all that good stuff.

    Guidlines for Characters:

    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Race:
    Type:(Type of Demon, Half-This Half-That Dirty Bloods, Job Humans)
    Abilities:(No Gods, no more than 3)
    Weapons:(no more than 4)
    Weakness:(YES, you have to have some)
    Description:
    Bio:
    Anything else you wish to add:

    Name: Marcus Kavor

    Age: 17

    Gender: Male

    Race: Dirty Blood

    Type: Half-Storm Demon, Half-Fear Demon

    Abilities: Control over Lightning, Control over Darkness(Fear,Shadows), Soul Steal

    Weapons: "kuro ko" means Dark sin(Long Samurai Sword), Ceremonial Dagger
    Weakness: Has two Eye like tattoos on his chest if both are hit than he is down and powerless for a long time(or dead for obvious reasons). Extreme sunlight hurts(dosn't mean the sun, but search lights, etc.)

    Description: Looks human for the most part. Tribal like tattoos all over his body with the main part in the center of hist chest with a broken hourglass and two all seeing eyes in the hourglass. Wears a jet black cloak most of the time, jet black hair goes to the middle of his back, eyes are blood red untill he uses his Darkness power than turns to shadows. skin is pale, he is lean, a little muscular, around 6 foot even. under his cloak he wears a jet black silk button up shirt, has a neckless with the ring of his dead wife, jet black Tripps(for those that don't know they are loose fitting jeans that have chains all over them), wears combat boots. He is fast, really fast, only unsheathes Kuro Ko for the killing blow.

    Bio: Before the war Marcus lived a simple life, he was a reaper for dead souls bringing them to the afterllife had a wife and two kids. His wifes name was Stormy, his little daughter Nichole, and his baby boy Michel. When the sacred text was stolen demons came and killed his village while he was on a soul retrival misson. He blames the humans for stealing the text and leting the demons kill his family. So now he is out for blood, he went to the human world to kill everything he can. He works as a Merc for hire taking souls as payment.

    Anything else you wish to add: Marcus is quiet keeps to his self, but sinces the death of his family he has become mentaly unstable and often is found arguing with his self.
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    Re: As the world burns

    It sounds ok right now. Develop the storyline more and add more details about what is goin' on. I would like to know more about this RPG before I join it.

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    Re: As the world burns

    well this sounds good so im in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: As the world burns

    I'm bored so i'll enter, i'll post dude before i go to sleep.

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    Re: As the world burns

    Well my basic idea was a all out war with lose allanices between the humans and a few dirty bloods (the "Good ones") againts the demons and other dirty bloods. Death, carnege, and mayhem everywhere. I want this to be as open as possible so if some one fells up to it i need a main "Good" guy and a main "Evil" guy. The good guy needs to be human and the evil guy demon with the dirty bloods just kind of in the middle some with the humans, some with the demons, and others just freelance.
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    okay ill join .

    Name:sokaree
    Age:16
    Gender:girl
    Race:demon
    Type:wolf demon
    Abilities:speed ,flexibility,very intelligent
    Weapons:sword,fans with blades
    Weakness:her friends and family
    Descriptionhttp://http://www.animeonline.net/pi...pictureid=3531Bio:she was alone since the beggining
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    Name: Zyta

    Age: 19

    Gender: Male

    Race: Dirty Blood

    Type: Demigod (Half God, Half human)

    Abilities:

    Zyta is able to sense any and all living beings’ life-force around him and can pinpoint their location. Only problem is, Zyta is unable to tell the difference between creatures of the same race such as two humans, two demons, two dogs, and so on. This flaw tends to lead to certain misunderstandings, sometimes including the death of the misunderstood.

    Being the imperfect son of God, the Creator, the Alpha and the Omega, Zyta has vast amounts of energy at his disposal which he can manipulate in any way that he desires. Below is a list of some of his favorite methods to manipulate energy:

    Explosions -
    Nearly all of Zyta’s energy attacks come with a small explosion-like treat to them; it would be best advised to think that there will be one rather than to make the mistake of not thinking it is there. Keep in mind though that each explosion IS AT ZYTA‘S DISCRETION. The most known area of Zyta’s to release an explosion comes from his naginata blade which is the most pure form of his explosions, resulting in the most powerful of them.

    Example! In terms of numbers, without using his naginata each explosion is halved (50%) in their destructive power, but with the naginata use he is able to make the most of the energy and hit at the full rate (100%) destructive power.


    Energy Manipulation-
    The most notable aspect to Zyta is his energy manipulation, and what he is most feared for. He could manipulate his energy AND only his energy, shaping it into whatever he desires. There are times when he makes the energy really small (cell-sized), but places them all over the area to create a landmine effect. Other times he could be molding it to something, yet for some reason or another shape it to something entirely different the next second, depending on the situation. The further he goes out from himself he slowly gets less and less control over it until the energy eventually explodes at a certain point, depending on the amount of energy being used at the time. Below are the four more famous forms that his energy takes through manipulations:
    • His Unbreakable Barrier – Uses the most energy out of all his techniques (half of his remaining energy) plus every added second takes more and more.
    • Sharper Blade – Zyta uses a constant stream of energy to activate the viscosity for its second and only other ability, sharpening the blade beyond any other now making it able to cleave through anything without effort whereas before the blade of the naginata is only a metal sword.
    • Healing – Zyta takes pure energy into his hands, one or both, and presses tightly to any injury and they are healed. Takes up to five seconds to complete with the five total for the most serious wounds.
    • Explosions – Which we have already gone over. (Explained in greater detail above.)


    Zyta is also able to concentrate on multiple energy manipulations at once, though with each manipulation being halved in its full capabilities until it gets Zyta’s full attention.

    Inherent Techniques/Abilities-
    Inherent Techniques are Zyta’s most powerful skills he could ever have, both of which require NO energy whatsoever to perform, but at the same time requires a LOT of time to perform. Both are unavoidable if completed. Both can be stopped instantly with a slap to the head, or any other form of physical interruption. Each Inherent Technique requires Three posts to complete. No more, No less!

    Tempest Eterna
    Tempest Eterna is a technique that separates an area and severing all ties it has with reality creating a pocket in space (matter). Inside the victim is put through the worst torture ever conceived. Most have said that Solitary Confinement for three hours is unusual and cruel punishment, being alone in an enclosed, tightly camped, pitch-black area with no one but yourself for company. Tempest Eterna is that and then some; the person is forced to vividly live out each person (s)he has ever cared for, even a tiny bit, and watch as they die over and over for the rest of eternity with each death being some new form of excruciating painful and slow death. It is impossible to escape from one you are inside and can only come down WHEN Zyta does OR he chooses to release it.

    Sin Harvest
    Sin Harvest is a powerful attack that, once hit, instantly kills the victim with a very painful death. As the technique if preformed, the victim gets a halo over their head, signaling that their death will come for them then, if not prevented beforehand. Once the halo is completed they begin to have a flash, a series of memories in which every sin they have ever committed from lying, cheating, stealing, killing, and so on from their birth till the current moment in time. That is the second post of the three. In the third and final (their death) their sins create an unstoppable rush of acid coursing through every fiber of their physical and sometimes mental, form; the acid rushes through all vital organs, cuts the veins/arteries and shatters bones. An instant before their death their skin bubbles with the acid coming to the surface and then they die, no longer recognizable as a person, let alone anything that ever lived.

    Both Tempest Eterna and Sin Harvest start with a special incantation for the first post. Start the effects in the second post and finish in the third. If it is not stopped by the third, consider it game over for the victim.

    Weapons: An assortments of swords ranging from the traditional katana, to the Dao, to the rapier and broadsword of the English, to a metal bat used for smashing. These weapons count as one for all of them are interchangeable with, and only with the others in the group. Zyta has a special bag that he made himself of Demon hide with holes cut through it hanging from his waist and sticks each weapon into the hole and tying them in place.

    Zyta’s most notable weapon, however is the naginata, forged from his Father’s will and tempered with his blood, it is a one of a kind weapon that only Zyta could use. What makes this blade special is its ability to do one of two things at Zyta’s command. The first is it is able to cut through anything like a hot knife through butter, however this requires a large amount of energy to perform—by human standards, it would require nearly their whole life of energy to perform. Even though it is a small perfect to Zyta, he treasures all of his energy and thus this power is used in seldom. The second and more energy efficient of the two is a simple explosion by cutting into reality; as the vacuum between reality and non-reality implodes on itself, the explosion is created. Though the explosion requires a certain amount of energy, too, but far less than the cutting ability.

    There is a side-effect to using the naginata even for simple practices without using one of the two abilities. If the weapon is ever held with an intent to attack with, it immediately begins sucking at the energy of the user, like a leech out for blood. This side-effect insures no one but Zyta uses his naginata (An effect God put in himself), the draining effect immediately renders the small energy of humans useless on contact, stealing all of their energy, forcing them to slip into unconsciousness. Angels, Demons, half-demons, as well as half-angels are still affected by the leech-like tendencies of the naginata, but at a much less consistency. Half-breeds may, at most, use the blade normally for ten good hits, one at most for using one of the special abilities. Full bloods twice that.

    For those that do not know, here is an example of what a naginata looks like: http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/...500_AA280_.jpg

    Weakness: In battle, Zyta is without weakness; he is a rational tactician with years studying from the best that history has to offer; his intelligence added with his innate fighting ability, as well as his Godly heritage make him almost invincible in terms of fighting. Outside of battle though is a different story altogether.

    His mind if weak, mentally. From his perch on Heaven, Zyta has witnessed the best and worst of humans, he has witnessed the fall of the angels, their gradual fall into demons, how humans interact with demons and form the half-breed race of half-demon, watched how angels, too, fell in live with humans and created babies. He was there when his elder brother, Jesus, died upon the cross, giving his everything to save humanity from this war to come. He was there when humanity rejected Jesus, cast away God for their own petty lives and desires. Zyta has experienced this for himself, as well and it cost him dearly.

    Zyta can’t stand the look of blood, the mere sight of it makes him nauseous, but he can hold it in if he needs to. Zyta also hates killing more than anything, he will kill if he must, but he’d rather get hurt than to hurt.

    Description: At first glance a passerby could instantly make out his muscular tone despite his body build hiding it away just under the surface. He has black hair that falls before his face and reaches down to the top of the shoulder, his hair hides a clean and youthful face. He is donned in weather-worn clothing from head to toe some of which include a vest, two leg and arm bracers, leather boots, and a cloak to mainly used to keep him warm on winter nights or while it rains. The two most notable parts to Zyta have to be his eyes and the crimson pendant about his chest. His eyes appear cold and depthless like a cavern suddenly scaring into the planet, ever changing and colorless are the pupils. The pendant that sits always on his chest unless forcibly taken off appears to be nothing more than a simple, but crafted very well, pendant of much value. The pendant is actually a limiter keeping in all his godly powers inherited by his father.

    Bio: Too lazy to do right now, you’ll learn in the RP.

    Anything else you wish to add:

    The difference between limiter on and Limiter off Zyta:

    While Zyta has the limiter on, his max capabilities are capped, though still very formidable. Most would say that he is about as athletic as a gold medalist in the Olympics and still stronger than most humans easily. A more accurate assumption would place Zyta’s limiter power equal to that of an experienced demon that has been trained to kill to survive and of one that does it proficiently. With the limiter off, Zyta’s power soars to unfathomable heights were only a chosen few are able to stand a chance against him.

    While the limiter is on, he suffers damages just like any other human, however once it comes off his skin becomes like hardened dragon skin, extremely durable and hard to pierce, slash, rip open.
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    Sheesh Zyta, THAT is a character sheet. I like how you develop you character so well even before the actual thing starts.

    Name: Amy

    Age: Appears 17, real age is around 39

    Gender: Female

    Race: Dirty Blood

    Type: Mostly Human - Part Cat Demon

    Abilities: ~

    Lightning Strike
    Amy charges with her dual swords and strikes eight times in various motions and places barely nicking her opponent then slashs once up with her right weapon and once down with her left weapon usually cutting their shoulders. Amy then runs up her opponent and kicks him in the face then lands and charges stabbing them in the left OR right side with both her swords. Then Amy jumps up and kicks her opponent off her swords and uses her Raiton: Itchi weaker blast(See Raiton: Ichi below).

    This attack will use about 25-35% of her energy.

    Vanish(Hide in Shadows)
    Amy becomes virtually invisable.

    The only way she can be seen is if she is moving in a place you are looking at (You will see a blurred movement), she touches you, or you focus your eyes right where she is for about five to ten seconds.

    This ability does not use any of her energy and she can use it when ever she wants although it is hard for her to use it in combat since they already know of her pressence there.

    Raiton: Ichi
    An energy attack the sends a bolt of lightning out of which ever sword she wants it to come out of, both if she chooses. It takes a little bit of her energy so she can cast it about 15-20 in a single fight before she become to tired and weak to cast. The attack will cause little damage, but it will stun who ever it hits.

    It uses about 5-7.5% of here energy at a time.

    A full power one can kill the one it hits, but it takes a long time to cast and if it does cast all the way it will drain her of about 90% of her energy leaving her extremely weak.

    The quick stunning version of this spell is instant, but the full attack version take 4 post to complete. The reading(Stance and everything), the focusing, the chanting, and finally the attack.

    These attack are very accurate since they are point and say spells. These Ninjutsu attacks are one of her most common ranged attacks that Amy uses.

    Innate Ability(Nothing useful in combat)
    Heals quickly when resting

    Regains her energy quickly while not moving.

    Weapons: Dual blades called Raikiri (Lightning Blade). Two hidden blades, one in each boot.

    Weakness: Amy's main weakness is any strong scented gas. Amy's highly enhanced smelling ability allows her to track people with just their scent, but strong smoke, smelling salt, or anything that has a strong scent will stun her, slow her, or even incompacitate her.

    Another weakness is grabbing her ears will stun her and make her lose her balance. (More of a funny weakness )

    Description:

    Bio: To lazy to do it now. You'll either find out about her in the RPG or I'll edit this later. Depends if I can think of a GREAT Bio.

    Anything else you wish to add:
    Amy is more shy and not very confident in her abilities, but she can be very rude. She doesn't know if she can do any good for anyone, but she is willing to try.

    She can move extremely fast and run at most of 70 miles per hour.

    She has above average strength but more human stamina.

    Average intellect
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