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    Angel

    An angel
    its as simple as that
    not a better known fact

    Not many left
    its been a great thefth
    this world needs more like'em

    a quick little poem
    no doubt 'bout that
    just something to show 'em
    that poetry I'm good at
    TRUE FACT!!!!

    An angel in the sky
    she flies so high
    her fluffy white wings
    the lullaby that she sings

    An angel to love
    an angel to hug
    where are these angels?
    where is my angel?
    Nothing but silence answers
    this un answerable inquiry
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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    Re: Angel

    the first three stanzas? Sucked. the last two? Cute. I expect more from you. Give me more. Rewrite it and post it again here.

    Oh, and we need to work on your damn story.
    Seduced by Flesh


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