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the first three stanzas? Sucked. the last two? Cute. I expect more from you. Give me more. Rewrite it and post it again here.
Oh, and we need to work on your damn story.
An angel
its as simple as that
not a better known fact
Not many left
its been a great thefth
this world needs more like'em
a quick little poem
no doubt 'bout that
just something to show 'em
that poetry I'm good at
TRUE FACT!!!!
An angel in the sky
she flies so high
her fluffy white wings
the lullaby that she sings
An angel to love
an angel to hug
where are these angels?
where is my angel?
Nothing but silence answers
this un answerable inquiry
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
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There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
the first three stanzas? Sucked. the last two? Cute. I expect more from you. Give me more. Rewrite it and post it again here.
Oh, and we need to work on your damn story.
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