Thread: Can you imagine?

^_^ Aww darling, I'm always here for you.

... >_> But I understand.

It's a beautiful poem, by the way. ^_^ Don't take this offensively: I know you can do better.

is kind'sa wierd how u make em but is full of pasion i can say that.

The passion is there and that's great, just be careful when you use the word imagine and what repeatedly! Now I'm not trying to offend you but I wrote a poem called "Thank You" and I used these word a lot! In short what I'm trying to say overall good job, just done write imagine and what so many times to where the reader gets tired of reading! Hope I didn't offend you.

I'm not a big fan of the repetition.

The repitition of words are great! I'm imagining something already the minute i was readinmg this poem....but the poem was kinda dull because of its topic but anyways,it was pretty. ^_^

Great poem, I liked the repetition and I could the reader can identitfy with the feelings described.

>o< thanks everyone! >.> i know it's not the best but this was more an excersize in my emotion then trying to make something grand...

<.< it felt so dull beecuz i felted dulled when i was writing it... dulled feelings, and dulled senses...

^_^ but i'm glad some of you still liked it! thanks a bunch!