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    Jinchu

    okay Jinchu is a VERY long poem i have been working on for years. it always changes and grows, adapts. it'll be posted in segments like these below for easier reading. about one a day i'll post one.

    Jinchu 1:1

    Halfway through this journey we all partake
    Of the year when great silver dragons streaked across the sky
    And from that great billows of rising smoke engulfed the air
    With crimson sulfur crying out, piercing with much weeping
    That I had become aware of another presence was approaching.

    He was a deceiver, cloaked as an innocent when really covering a shadow
    A great demon was abiding within with huge black wings of fire
    A cynical laughter and a mind like a criminal’s.
    Thus did I meet my maker
    And I believed all its lies and fell into the trap

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    Re: Jinchu

    i would like some comments, lol

    Jinchu 2:2

    The trap of believing him to be some sort of angel
    With majestic wings of gold and white light, destroyed.
    The innocent was just a shell as the beast inside grew
    Slowly the innocent changed from timid to demonic
    Yet the passage of time would be longer to change than for an infant’s shower to rise up.

    The innocent and I were inseparable, creating a bond of pure trust
    The lies of the world we would suck in resembling leeches at most times
    Darkness and light, Good and evil was conceived to be interchangeable
    The lies we believed killed us with a morbid stream of bugs
    Internally the disease struck hard and fast and left us dumb with confusion

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