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| 丹色 月影 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: At the piano.. ♫ |♩
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![]() ![]() | My latest ... Black Glass A hundred words have passed his lips A thousand voices he can recollect A million people he has known But never seen. Sometimes his life is confusing Like solving a puzzle of solid white The clouds he walks on Are falling down. There’s lightning diving down to earth The calm has been blown away The rain is beginning to fall Winds are changing. The world is collapsing in the chaos of it’s own And the man can finally see, See the pandemonium through blindness See the universe through black glass.
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![]() RPG Lord and Master/Poet Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada)
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![]() ![]() | Re: My latest ... Darkness, hope, confusion, deception. It's kinda sad for him to finally see and well...see the word at its end. Nice storytelling, or Ballad as it's called or something. I wonder if we could tell a whole story through poetry...would take a while, that's for sure. *gets an idea*, I'm off!!!
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| Devoted Otaku Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily
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![]() ![]() | Re: My latest ... That was very well written. No complaints really. Except the repetitivness used in the beginning of each line. If you took out the "A" and "The". Its sentence will still make sense. And will still flow very well.
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![]() ![]() | Re: My latest ... I believe that it's called a sonnet. To tell a whole story through a poem. Take Sir Gawain and the Green Knight for example.
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