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    The beauty one behold deep in
    The smile one gives

    The blessing everyone recieve
    The truth behind all doubts

    The hold of a hand
    The air we breathe

    A embrace one loves to feel
    The life we live

    Our heart that beats
    The love one shares

    Forever promised
    Unbroken hearts felt

    The tears one cries
    Emotional destroyed

    The hope of destiny
    The destiny of hope

    Life or death
    Death or life

    The questions are asked
    The answers are given

    Where do one stand now?
    What is the meaning to all?

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    Re: No Title

    Hmph (concentrate)
    is it no tittle cuz ur talking about the inner feelins
    cuz its really awesome if u see it that way.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: No Title

    The grammar needs desprate attention. And the end could have made more sense. It was a good idea of a poem. But a poem's grammar is just as important as the feeling. Its a huge distraction to try and figure out what the writer was trying to say if its written in the wrong form and/or context.

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