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Hmph (concentrate)
is it no tittle cuz ur talking about the inner feelins
cuz its really awesome if u see it that way.
The beauty one behold deep in
The smile one gives
The blessing everyone recieve
The truth behind all doubts
The hold of a hand
The air we breathe
A embrace one loves to feel
The life we live
Our heart that beats
The love one shares
Forever promised
Unbroken hearts felt
The tears one cries
Emotional destroyed
The hope of destiny
The destiny of hope
Life or death
Death or life
The questions are asked
The answers are given
Where do one stand now?
What is the meaning to all?
Hmph (concentrate)
is it no tittle cuz ur talking about the inner feelins
cuz its really awesome if u see it that way.
perdoname michelle!
The grammar needs desprate attention. And the end could have made more sense. It was a good idea of a poem. But a poem's grammar is just as important as the feeling. Its a huge distraction to try and figure out what the writer was trying to say if its written in the wrong form and/or context.
I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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