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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,928 | No Title The beauty one behold deep in The smile one gives The blessing everyone recieve The truth behind all doubts The hold of a hand The air we breathe A embrace one loves to feel The life we live Our heart that beats The love one shares Forever promised Unbroken hearts felt The tears one cries Emotional destroyed The hope of destiny The destiny of hope Life or death Death or life The questions are asked The answers are given Where do one stand now? What is the meaning to all? |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 309 | Re: No Title Hmph (concentrate) is it no tittle cuz ur talking about the inner feelins cuz its really awesome if u see it that way.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 601 | Re: No Title The grammar needs desprate attention. And the end could have made more sense. It was a good idea of a poem. But a poem's grammar is just as important as the feeling. Its a huge distraction to try and figure out what the writer was trying to say if its written in the wrong form and/or context.
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