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    This poem is original, but the one thing that gets me is the clock! By this line:

    Tick toc, listen to the sound
    that ticks on the clock
    listen to the sound of *****
    as she licks on a rooster

    did you mean the ticking away of you life? just curious!

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    wat it means, its like, my life passes by, and at this time on the clock it stops, and someone's doin the :-0 <--- insert here thing >>
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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    Well thanks for clearing that line up for me! Because honestly the poem pretty good just that line threw me, and just be careful on the cussing, I know it's not allowed in the forum, so maybe just asterix it out and let the reader put whatever he or she feels goes there! just a suggestion!

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