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Old Oct 10, 2006, 01:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Snap

Picture.

what comes to your mind?
in this picture.

Are you dancing in the moonlight?
Are you singing to the stars?
Are you speaking to the trees?
Are you reaching to the spring?

so many things to do in a snap shot of time.

SNAP

where are you now?

SNAP

what happends next?

SNAP

Are you any different than before?
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Old Oct 10, 2006, 02:16 AM   #2 (permalink)
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This poem has a different angle, but it's very interesting. I like the way you used the view of life in the form of a camera! Overall good job!
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Old Oct 10, 2006, 02:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The fact that you are asking about a certain picture, ruins it for me. Instead of saying "this" you should have identified what you were referring to.
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Old Oct 12, 2006, 10:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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This practices the imagination of anyone reading this, quite a few spelling errors, but still fun to read. I don't consider this a poem though. It's like some kind of exercise to relax the mind in my opinion xD
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Old Oct 13, 2006, 12:07 AM   #5 (permalink)
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@SolDAT: O.O Oh? really? ^_^ that's still cool!

thanks everyone for critiqueing my poem!
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Old Oct 13, 2006, 12:30 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hey that's what AO is here for! To bring the potential of a person to the surface and help mold there talents into masterpieces!
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