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This poem has a different angle, but it's very interesting. I like the way you used the view of life in the form of a camera! Overall good job!
Picture.
what comes to your mind?
in this picture.
Are you dancing in the moonlight?
Are you singing to the stars?
Are you speaking to the trees?
Are you reaching to the spring?
so many things to do in a snap shot of time.
SNAP
where are you now?
SNAP
what happends next?
SNAP
Are you any different than before?
This poem has a different angle, but it's very interesting. I like the way you used the view of life in the form of a camera! Overall good job!
The fact that you are asking about a certain picture, ruins it for me. Instead of saying "this" you should have identified what you were referring to.
Seduced by Flesh
This practices the imagination of anyone reading this, quite a few spelling errors, but still fun to read. I don't consider this a poem though. It's like some kind of exercise to relax the mind in my opinion xD
Originally Posted by Soldat of life
Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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@SolDAT: O.O Oh? really? ^_^ that's still cool!
thanks everyone for critiqueing my poem!
Hey that's what AO is here for! To bring the potential of a person to the surface and help mold there talents into masterpieces!
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