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    These are my Emotions- Soshi

    ^_^ I thought instead of flooding the forum with threads of my poems, I'd rather just have a little section for myself...

    I don't really hold to an emotion... It can be anything. Because that's what a person should be: Anything they wish to be.

    However, as for style... I love freeverse.. THAT is my style. ANYTHING.
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    Poem #1: Fire

    A fire burns in my eyes
    Whenever I feel alive
    Whenever I feel awake
    Whenever I say it's mine

    A fire burns in my soul
    It purifies and it destroys
    I wish for nothing more
    For this is what is mine

    I am a soul of fire
    A creature that consumes
    And creates from it

    I do not bring death
    Rather, I give new life to it
    See the ugliness that you have left
    And start what you are now

    I am a soul of fire
    A fire burns in my eyes
    A fire burns in my soul
    A soul burns inside me

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    ::splashes water::

    ^o^ hohohohohohoo! i'm funny...

    ANYWAY!

    ^_^ that was truly wonderful my Darling. it had rhyme, reason and a little beat to it as well. i could feel the "watchfulness" in the poem and it was very calming, definatly a very good poem!

    Keep up the great work Darling! i know you will!

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    Funny that you mention "splashes"...

    Poem #2: Water

    I rumble in the winds
    And I rumble in the grounds
    I am a fury
    And I am a calm

    I am what I am
    And I am who you are

    You can see into me
    And I can see into you

    I am not a teacher of most
    And I am not a student of some

    I go my own way
    I follow my own sound

    I am easy to affect
    I am easy to effect
    I am easy

    I am water
    Push and pull
    Push and pulled
    Cleansing
    Crushing

    I am water
    It is not my flaw
    It is not my decision

    I am who I am
    And that is why I go my own way

    I am nothing more
    And nothing less
    I am water
    I am water

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    ^_^ that ones is very good to Darling!

    your words had a certain "fluid" affect that i found very interesting!

    it has layers! this makes me very happy...

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    ^_^ This one's dedicated to you, Abu...

    Poem #3: Just to Embarrass You with the Truth


    My darling my darling
    Your body always amazes me
    Your every curve and every look

    I could remember as back as back in the day
    When I found these instinctual rumbles as a weakness

    But you know more than anyone else
    How much I have made myself so weak for you

    Your feel
    Your smell
    Your touch
    Your taste

    The way you move
    Whether smoothly
    Whether clumsy

    Your sound
    Oh what sound

    You send ruptures through my spines
    You panic all my senses

    I feel a rush
    An uncontrollable fury
    I find myself in control
    And yet as a slave

    You are more
    You are more
    You are more

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    *^-^* awww shucks...

    >[..]< oh my goodness... Darling, that was very sweet...

    ^_^ that made me very happy...

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    Sometimes I consider a definition as a poem in itself.


    Poem #4: Definition of "D@mmit"

    D@mmit
    A replica of a cursing word
    It is to mean "Curse this, but do not quote me"
    It is to mean "May this be brought to hell, respectively"
    It is a curse word of a childishly humorous respect
    It may be used to excuse itself from virgin ears/eyes by stating that it is spelled incorrectly

    Sentences of which it can be used in:

    falling off a cliff by accident (regret) "...D@mmit."
    - to express a form of regret at a moment caused by own stupidity.

    boulder rolling towards speaker (a sense of no escape) "D@mmit."
    - to express a form of regret at an unstoppable tragedy-to-happen.

    speaking of love (strong sense of emotion) "I love you, D@mmit!"
    - to underline previous, or proceeding message, to give it more emotion

    speaking of the word (noun) "The word 'D@mmit' is awesome."
    - to express it as nothing more than a subject

    you just lost your house (irrational verbal abuse) "D@mmit, D@mmit, D@mmit!"
    - an irrational state of which is usually blamed at an anonymous group of people, sometimes specified. An expression of stress.

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    ^o^ ohohohhohohhoooooooooooooooooooo!

    ^_^ i thought that was very adorable my love! i don't think i've ever seen a definition as a poem before!

    ^o^ most intriging!

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