^_^ I thought instead of flooding the forum with threads of my poems, I'd rather just have a little section for myself...
I don't really hold to an emotion... It can be anything. Because that's what a person should be: Anything they wish to be.
However, as for style... I love freeverse.. THAT is my style. ANYTHING.
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Poem #1: Fire
A fire burns in my eyes
Whenever I feel alive
Whenever I feel awake
Whenever I say it's mine
A fire burns in my soul
It purifies and it destroys
I wish for nothing more
For this is what is mine
I am a soul of fire
A creature that consumes
And creates from it
I do not bring death
Rather, I give new life to it
See the ugliness that you have left
And start what you are now
I am a soul of fire
A fire burns in my eyes
A fire burns in my soul
A soul burns inside me
::splashes water::
^o^ hohohohohohoo! i'm funny...
ANYWAY!
^_^ that was truly wonderful my Darling. it had rhyme, reason and a little beat to it as well. i could feel the "watchfulness" in the poem and it was very calming, definatly a very good poem!
Keep up the great work Darling! i know you will!
Funny that you mention "splashes"...
Poem #2: Water
I rumble in the winds
And I rumble in the grounds
I am a fury
And I am a calm
I am what I am
And I am who you are
You can see into me
And I can see into you
I am not a teacher of most
And I am not a student of some
I go my own way
I follow my own sound
I am easy to affect
I am easy to effect
I am easy
I am water
Push and pull
Push and pulled
Cleansing
Crushing
I am water
It is not my flaw
It is not my decision
I am who I am
And that is why I go my own way
I am nothing more
And nothing less
I am water
I am water
^_^ that ones is very good to Darling!
your words had a certain "fluid" affect that i found very interesting!
it has layers! this makes me very happy...
^_^ This one's dedicated to you, Abu...
Poem #3: Just to Embarrass You with the Truth
My darling my darling
Your body always amazes me
Your every curve and every look
I could remember as back as back in the day
When I found these instinctual rumbles as a weakness
But you know more than anyone else
How much I have made myself so weak for you
Your feel
Your smell
Your touch
Your taste
The way you move
Whether smoothly
Whether clumsy
Your sound
Oh what sound
You send ruptures through my spines
You panic all my senses
I feel a rush
An uncontrollable fury
I find myself in control
And yet as a slave
You are more
You are more
You are more
*^-^* awww shucks...
>[..]< oh my goodness... Darling, that was very sweet...
^_^ that made me very happy...
Sometimes I consider a definition as a poem in itself.
Poem #4: Definition of "D@mmit"
D@mmit
A replica of a cursing word
It is to mean "Curse this, but do not quote me"
It is to mean "May this be brought to hell, respectively"
It is a curse word of a childishly humorous respect
It may be used to excuse itself from virgin ears/eyes by stating that it is spelled incorrectly
Sentences of which it can be used in:
falling off a cliff by accident (regret) "...D@mmit."
- to express a form of regret at a moment caused by own stupidity.
boulder rolling towards speaker (a sense of no escape) "D@mmit."
- to express a form of regret at an unstoppable tragedy-to-happen.
speaking of love (strong sense of emotion) "I love you, D@mmit!"
- to underline previous, or proceeding message, to give it more emotion
speaking of the word (noun) "The word 'D@mmit' is awesome."
- to express it as nothing more than a subject
you just lost your house (irrational verbal abuse) "D@mmit, D@mmit, D@mmit!"
- an irrational state of which is usually blamed at an anonymous group of people, sometimes specified. An expression of stress.
^o^ ohohohhohohhoooooooooooooooooooo!
^_^ i thought that was very adorable my love! i don't think i've ever seen a definition as a poem before!
^o^ most intriging!
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