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    Writer's Ambition

    Writer's Ambition


    Constantly blocked by thought of reality
    Inspiration tries to run through my mind
    My pen begins to move and words start to flow
    Words and phrases pieced together to make a poem

    You never see me out there doing my own thing
    Only at home with my book and pen
    The only thing you would begin to think
    Is poor boy all he does is work

    Each line laced and formed with my emotions
    In hopes of trying to execute each line perfectly
    Keeping and open mind for new thoughts and ideas
    Comments and critiques come from each one of my peers

    From thought of lost love to poems of joy
    To feelings of darkness and words of grief
    Every second spent searching my mind
    With the dream of ambition as my guide

    I had some help on this one from my buddy fma1012, and I hope that you all like it!

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    Re: Writer's Ambition

    The last stanza was absolutely beautiful. I felt a completion in the poem.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Writer's Ambition

    Thank You Sensi! I honestly had trouble writing this poem, but I guess it worked out in the end!

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