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    POTM for November: Seasons

    The next subject came to me as a thought of the general happenings of this year. We aren't at the end just yet, but as next month is the month of magic, wonder and christmas, november will have to do for this idea I just had. I let you go loose in this one, but if you demonstrate rhymes or any other form of more intricate poetry, I will evaluate your poem more appreciatively.

    In short, a free verse poem that is well written has a chance to win, but a poem with more technic that is just as good as the free verse poem will be deemed better if I need to choose between two great poems.

    So as the title says, this month let's your inspiration write about what a lot of people know as:

    Seasons

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    Re: POTM for November: Seasons

    Hello poetry ninjas ^^
    This POTM is about Seasons ^^

    Here's my sample of POTM, ^^



    Fading memories of a Snowman

    Snowflakes falling from the sky,
    Resemble angels white wings,
    A miraculous view it might seem,
    A beauty that is only transitory.

    Many children play snow ball fighting,
    There are others who begins ice skating,
    Some engaged themselves in snowman making,
    A lovely masterpiece they can never miss.

    A product of children’s imagination,
    That is what I understand about my creation.
    Their laughter and smiles comprises my spirit,
    My delicate body is composed mainly of snow.

    I am so thankful for the hands
    Who shaped me into something special,
    Sincerely sharing happiness,
    To an inanimate object that I am.

    I know my memories will not stay,
    The sun will melt my essence someday.
    Trace of a snowman will be long forgotten,
    Until heaven will create winter again.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: POTM for November: Seasons

    Seasons


    Cloudy days
    endless rain
    makes depresion and oceans
    in the empty holes and souls

    Shiny light
    shiny rays
    they make the clouds disapear
    will they heat the land in fear

    Sun goes
    Sun is down
    leaves start to fall around
    with diferent color diferent emotion

    Coldest winter
    Coldest nights
    trees freeze will the sun fights
    for the melting of the new land



    perdoname michelle!

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