Potw 10-03/10-09

Since Kasai will be gone till thursday, she can't rally give prizes out for the last contest....and if she did, I haven't seen anywhere that she gave it, but just to keep this place going, I'll make my own POTW and I'll give out the points if she doesn't by sunday. The last two contests were a bout Death and Hope, now let's see if you can write about the thing you check maybe the most in the net:

AnimeOnline

I'll be writing one, even if I wrote 2 on this subject already, have fun and someone ows me 2 pages of poetry about AO ;)



EDIT: and here it is!!!!



AO

Life conceded by animation,
Discussions leading the anicent powers.
Slowly it becomes something more,
A community of newcomers and elders.
Pushing back the boundaries of old,
Finally implication in the every day moment.
New beginings that inspire another start,
Expanding possibilities make way once again.
Opening to a greater perspective,
World domination far from this forum's intent.
Yet debates flow endlessly onward,
Fervent defenders and offensors fight on for the truth.
Closing down the occasional nonesens,
The heart of the community leads our thoughts with an iron first.
Offering a place to belong to in times of relative nonesense,
Everyone regroup to form a small world where all can be who they wanna be..
...Except that rules do apply xD

Well then, I'm not sure if this is good or not, but it won't count in the contest, just felt like adding some encouragement and example of what you could write, though it can be completely different depending on your own style and length ;)

take this!
''hate thrown away''
without having nothing to say
Im just a big pile
looking for an eternal smile

can it be freed from pain?
thats something i cannot pay
with a lot of money-i

because i will be found
my soul, freed from pain and sorrow
baby hone

I've been looking for a place
for i to look for myself
a mirror perhaps and ask my self

how can i be found
if theres no one around me
to listen to my voice and sound?

by looking at my self in the mirror
i saw what pulled th trigger
because i din't have love to share

with my feelins
soon or after i will have the smile
with i can use to be found and loved

This was written about someone i met here on AO. I had to revise and rewrite the end to fit Soldats criteria. But i hope its enjoyable. Or at least makes some sense :)


Imagine your breath
Touching me
My blood rushes through me
Pinks my cheeks
Settles in calm breathes
Eyes wide, lashes like wings
Soaring into you
Your lips part
And I stop
Attentively letting it run through me
Observing your eyes penetrate my body
Sliding closer to you
Coupled hands
Looking away as though
You have taken away my strength
Admit defeat
Consume me in you
In your arms
Take me
You’ve drawn me in
To this place
And let me lay alone
Its cold here
On the floor
Where you once were
But its time to move on
Others have come
There friendships have filled your abyss
I don’t need you anymore
My friend

Click. Type.
Click. Type.

Copy. Paste.
Copy. Paste.

Read. Post.
Read. Post.

PM. PM.
PM. PM.

E. Mail.
E. Mail.

These few actions.
These few movements.
And i gain friends i never dreamed.
And i see sides of my Lover never known.

A society that binds different people
People of different nations
Nations bounded by distance
Distance used to be unbeatable foe.

Different people are being tied
Tied with a strong bond
Bond that is not a new interest
Interest is what we call "ANIME"


Days and nights now something special
Special that everyone has a friend
A friend will be there to rescue
Rescue a soul in agony.

AO

Like a Phoenix rising from the ashes
AO is the place that revives.
Intense conversations about anime emerge
New relationships and friendships formed.

A place where writer can learn
And potential formed
Artist realize their talents and dreams
Masterpieces soon formed with AO as the core.

Living and breathing anime
Body becomes excited and trembles.
As new horizions are reached
AO the land of anime where dreams peak.

Like the Alpha and Omega
Begining and End
AO is the start
AO is the End.

Awesome. I'll give all of the participants in the last contest points.

22 hours and 53 minutes left everyone xD

There are still plenty who haven't posted, your last day all ;)