Potw 10-03/10-09

Soldat of life · Oct 03, 2006, 06:26 AM

Since Kasai will be gone till thursday, she can't rally give prizes out for the last contest....and if she did, I haven't seen anywhere that she gave it, but just to keep this place going, I'll make my own POTW and I'll give out the points if she doesn't by sunday. The last two contests were a bout Death and Hope, now let's see if you can write about the thing you check maybe the most in the net:

AnimeOnline

I'll be writing one, even if I wrote 2 on this subject already, have fun and someone ows me 2 pages of poetry about AO

EDIT: and here it is!!!!

AO

Life conceded by animation,
Discussions leading the anicent powers.
Slowly it becomes something more,
A community of newcomers and elders.
Pushing back the boundaries of old,
Finally implication in the every day moment.
New beginings that inspire another start,
Expanding possibilities make way once again.
Opening to a greater perspective,
World domination far from this forum's intent.
Yet debates flow endlessly onward,
Fervent defenders and offensors fight on for the truth.
Closing down the occasional nonesens,
The heart of the community leads our thoughts with an iron first.
Offering a place to belong to in times of relative nonesense,
Everyone regroup to form a small world where all can be who they wanna be..
...Except that rules do apply xD

Well then, I'm not sure if this is good or not, but it won't count in the contest, just felt like adding some encouragement and example of what you could write, though it can be completely different depending on your own style and length

*Baal* · Oct 05, 2006, 07:14 PM

take this!
''hate thrown away''
without having nothing to say
Im just a big pile
looking for an eternal smile

can it be freed from pain?
thats something i cannot pay
with a lot of money-i

because i will be found
my soul, freed from pain and sorrow
baby hone

I've been looking for a place
for i to look for myself
a mirror perhaps and ask my self

how can i be found
if theres no one around me
to listen to my voice and sound?

by looking at my self in the mirror
i saw what pulled th trigger
because i din't have love to share

with my feelins
soon or after i will have the smile
with i can use to be found and loved

Nympho · Oct 05, 2006, 07:50 PM

This was written about someone i met here on AO. I had to revise and rewrite the end to fit Soldats criteria. But i hope its enjoyable. Or at least makes some sense

Imagine your breath
Touching me
My blood rushes through me
Pinks my cheeks
Settles in calm breathes
Eyes wide, lashes like wings
Soaring into you
Your lips part
And I stop
Attentively letting it run through me
Observing your eyes penetrate my body
Sliding closer to you
Coupled hands
Looking away as though
You have taken away my strength
Admit defeat
Consume me in you
In your arms
Take me
You’ve drawn me in
To this place
And let me lay alone
Its cold here
On the floor
Where you once were
But its time to move on
Others have come
There friendships have filled your abyss
I don’t need you anymore
My friend

*Abu Dhabi* · Oct 06, 2006, 09:24 AM

Click. Type.
Click. Type.

Copy. Paste.
Copy. Paste.

Read. Post.
Read. Post.

PM. PM.
PM. PM.

E. Mail.
E. Mail.

These few actions.
These few movements.
And i gain friends i never dreamed.
And i see sides of my Lover never known.

raja_psyche · Oct 08, 2006, 12:45 AM

A society that binds different people
People of different nations
Nations bounded by distance
Distance used to be unbeatable foe.

Different people are being tied
Tied with a strong bond
Bond that is not a new interest
Interest is what we call "ANIME"

Days and nights now something special
Special that everyone has a friend
A friend will be there to rescue
Rescue a soul in agony.

BlueFox1 · Oct 08, 2006, 03:45 AM

AO

Like a Phoenix rising from the ashes
AO is the place that revives.
Intense conversations about anime emerge
New relationships and friendships formed.

A place where writer can learn
And potential formed
Artist realize their talents and dreams
Masterpieces soon formed with AO as the core.

Living and breathing anime
Body becomes excited and trembles.
As new horizions are reached
AO the land of anime where dreams peak.

Like the Alpha and Omega
Begining and End
AO is the start
AO is the End.

*Kasai* · Oct 08, 2006, 11:45 AM

Awesome. I'll give all of the participants in the last contest points.

Soldat of life · Oct 08, 2006, 10:07 PM

22 hours and 53 minutes left everyone xD

There are still plenty who haven't posted, your last day all

*Soshi Kitai* · Oct 09, 2006, 02:23 PM

AO...

Anime Online...
*sigh*
A click and a type away
That's what it seems to me
And here are all the people
Of which I always see

I mean no harm in that
And I find no judgement in them
For they are here
Just as I am

I type just to give my voice
And hope that it is just heard
I wonder if I want them to listen
And not misunderstand

In this place that I call AO
I listen to others
Those who believe their words
Have fallen on deaf ears

And if that is so...
Then I must be most deaf.

This is the AO I speak
This is the AO I hear

*Kasai* · Oct 10, 2006, 02:29 AM

Contest over.

I'll let Maxxy name the winner and I'll give out the prize.

Oct 03, 2006, 06:26 AM	#1 (permalink)
Soldat of life RPG Lord and Master/Poet Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada) Posts: 850 Thanks: 1 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 4,048	Potw 10-03/10-09 Since Kasai will be gone till thursday, she can't rally give prizes out for the last contest....and if she did, I haven't seen anywhere that she gave it, but just to keep this place going, I'll make my own POTW and I'll give out the points if she doesn't by sunday. The last two contests were a bout Death and Hope, now let's see if you can write about the thing you check maybe the most in the net: AnimeOnline I'll be writing one, even if I wrote 2 on this subject already, have fun and someone ows me 2 pages of poetry about AO EDIT: and here it is!!!! AO Life conceded by animation, Discussions leading the anicent powers. Slowly it becomes something more, A community of newcomers and elders. Pushing back the boundaries of old, Finally implication in the every day moment. New beginings that inspire another start, Expanding possibilities make way once again. Opening to a greater perspective, World domination far from this forum's intent. Yet debates flow endlessly onward, Fervent defenders and offensors fight on for the truth. Closing down the occasional nonesens, The heart of the community leads our thoughts with an iron first. Offering a place to belong to in times of relative nonesense, Everyone regroup to form a small world where all can be who they wanna be.. ...Except that rules do apply xD Well then, I'm not sure if this is good or not, but it won't count in the contest, just felt like adding some encouragement and example of what you could write, though it can be completely different depending on your own style and length __________________ Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^ Poetry Corner Last edited by Soldat of life; Oct 05, 2006 at 07:22 PM.
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Oct 05, 2006, 07:14 PM	#2 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 309	take this! ''hate thrown away'' without having nothing to say Im just a big pile looking for an eternal smile can it be freed from pain? thats something i cannot pay with a lot of money-i because i will be found my soul, freed from pain and sorrow baby hone I've been looking for a place for i to look for myself a mirror perhaps and ask my self how can i be found if theres no one around me to listen to my voice and sound? by looking at my self in the mirror i saw what pulled th trigger because i din't have love to share with my feelins soon or after i will have the smile with i can use to be found and loved __________________ perdoname michelle!
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Oct 05, 2006, 07:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	This was written about someone i met here on AO. I had to revise and rewrite the end to fit Soldats criteria. But i hope its enjoyable. Or at least makes some sense Imagine your breath Touching me My blood rushes through me Pinks my cheeks Settles in calm breathes Eyes wide, lashes like wings Soaring into you Your lips part And I stop Attentively letting it run through me Observing your eyes penetrate my body Sliding closer to you Coupled hands Looking away as though You have taken away my strength Admit defeat Consume me in you In your arms Take me You’ve drawn me in To this place And let me lay alone Its cold here On the floor Where you once were But its time to move on Others have come There friendships have filled your abyss I don’t need you anymore My friend __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Oct 06, 2006, 09:24 AM	#4 (permalink)
Abu Dhabi Spoken for. Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Neither here... nor there. Posts: 1,507 Thanks: 12 Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 6,499	Click. Type. Click. Type. Copy. Paste. Copy. Paste. Read. Post. Read. Post. PM. PM. PM. PM. E. Mail. E. Mail. These few actions. These few movements. And i gain friends i never dreamed. And i see sides of my Lover never known. __________________ Animal Friends! great day! want to read my comic? go here~!
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Oct 08, 2006, 12:45 AM	#5 (permalink)
raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,477	A society that binds different people People of different nations Nations bounded by distance Distance used to be unbeatable foe. Different people are being tied Tied with a strong bond Bond that is not a new interest Interest is what we call "ANIME" Days and nights now something special Special that everyone has a friend A friend will be there to rescue Rescue a soul in agony. __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!	Anime Online Rulez!

Oct 08, 2006, 03:45 AM	#6 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,156	AO Like a Phoenix rising from the ashes AO is the place that revives. Intense conversations about anime emerge New relationships and friendships formed. A place where writer can learn And potential formed Artist realize their talents and dreams Masterpieces soon formed with AO as the core. Living and breathing anime Body becomes excited and trembles. As new horizions are reached AO the land of anime where dreams peak. Like the Alpha and Omega Begining and End AO is the start AO is the End. __________________
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Oct 08, 2006, 11:45 AM	#7 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,380	Awesome. I'll give all of the participants in the last contest points. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Oct 08, 2006, 10:07 PM	#8 (permalink)
Soldat of life RPG Lord and Master/Poet Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada) Posts: 850 Thanks: 1 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 4,048	22 hours and 53 minutes left everyone xD There are still plenty who haven't posted, your last day all __________________ Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^ Poetry Corner
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Oct 09, 2006, 02:23 PM	#9 (permalink)
Soshi Kitai For You... Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: The farther you go, the less you know. Posts: 1,245 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 5 Posts Credits: 9,052	AO... Anime Online... sigh A click and a type away That's what it seems to me And here are all the people Of which I always see I mean no harm in that And I find no judgement in them For they are here Just as I am I type just to give my voice And hope that it is just heard I wonder if I want them to listen And not misunderstand In this place that I call AO I listen to others Those who believe their words Have fallen on deaf ears And if that is so... Then I must be most deaf. This is the AO I speak This is the AO I hear __________________ Click here to Brawl! We had an awesome anniversary! Click here to join in on the fun!
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Oct 10, 2006, 02:29 AM	#10 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,380	Contest over. I'll let Maxxy name the winner and I'll give out the prize. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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