Potw 9-18/9-24

*Kasai* · Sep 18, 2006, 06:55 PM

Last weeks winner was: Abu Dhabi
Runner up: BrightShadow_96

Abu, your poem about the dead cat kept me intrigued on the subject. Well done.

This weeks subject: Hope

*Abu Dhabi* · Sep 19, 2006, 01:27 AM

Hope is like...
a bag.
something that you carry around with you.
something that holds what you hold dear.

At times, it can be a hassel to carry.
on a day that's turning bad, hot, or long.
it can tear sometimes, it's contents spilling out.

it can be a fragile thing.
easily ripped or broken or soaked or lost.

That's why you have to hold it close to your heart, where it belongs.

Nympho · Sep 20, 2006, 10:50 PM

Forbidden lover, best friend

In some kind of weak existence
I hear you

When all the day has gone
And all that there is left is
Darkness
I see you

As I move from place to place
I listen for
The harsh caw of the crow
And I feel you

Peoples faces interchange in traffic
Looking up in thoughtlessness
You appear
And I lose you

Depending on my carelessness
Tripping over my own reverie
I remember our adventure
And I fall for you.

Withdrawing from you is the hardest thing
The music bringing me back
I refuse
I savor you

I hope someday we can meet again
Until then
I miss you

Soldat of life · Sep 22, 2006, 09:31 AM

White light

Inside or out,
We all are blessed.
With the feeling of hope inside of us,
Nothing stands stronger than oneself.
Granting a moment of peace throughout,
Feeling it touch you and feeling good inside.

Holding, grasping, absorbing,
Reaching out to it all.
Floating in your mind,
Calling out to everyone out there.
Running on an endless thought,
Crying out a single word.

While the wait may be long,
There is no despair in the air.
As the answer comes from somewhere,
There is only one thing expressed.
Fleeting ideas that are no more,
Granting white light that is warmer than love.

raja_psyche · Sep 22, 2006, 03:55 PM

An Optimistic Core

Darkness gives rise of sadness,
Sadness that causes several sins,
Sins that make a person feel,
Feel submission to eternal defeat.

Psyche's being harshly stroked,
Stroked by the past memories,
Memories of a hundred people,
People who never shown concern.

Blaming all of it to cruel life,
Life that is always unjust and unfair,
Unfair in the sense of choosing,
Choosing a being susceptible to losing.

I have been to that road before,
Before I met a special someone,
Someone who became my sunshine,
Sunshine that saved me from darkness.

Giving emotional warmth,
Warmth that I once thought,
Thought it was mere dream,
Dream now he makes to reality.

This optimistic core shows beauty,
Beauty in everything he sees,
Sees positive out of the negative,
Negative is a thing he will never miss.

“In spite of the troubles,
He never gave up hope
An optimistic feeling that
Everything is going to turn out well.”

*Baal* · Sep 22, 2006, 09:48 PM

Shining eyes
shining tears
lovely life

all you can hear
the rays of light coming to clear
all those bad feelings u had near

hope is existed in ur heart
when you're feeling sad
it gives you another chance

to keep hoping of a new start
and being surronded by love
stars shining in ur eyes

waiting for the moment
waiting for the sign
waiting for a cheer

all that u can think of is in here
inside the heart and hopes
and eternal dreams

Sep 18, 2006, 06:55 PM	#1 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,616	Potw 9-18/9-24 Last weeks winner was: Abu Dhabi Runner up: BrightShadow_96 Abu, your poem about the dead cat kept me intrigued on the subject. Well done. This weeks subject: Hope __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Sep 19, 2006, 01:27 AM	#2 (permalink)
Abu Dhabi Spoken for. Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Mr. Foxie's Den... Posts: 1,519 Thanks: 21 Thanked 17 Times in 14 Posts Credits: 7,720	Re: Potw 9-18/9-24 Hope is like... a bag. something that you carry around with you. something that holds what you hold dear. At times, it can be a hassel to carry. on a day that's turning bad, hot, or long. it can tear sometimes, it's contents spilling out. it can be a fragile thing. easily ripped or broken or soaked or lost. That's why you have to hold it close to your heart, where it belongs. __________________ i don't know ka-rate, but i know ka-RAZY!! great day! . . .
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Sep 20, 2006, 10:50 PM	#3 (permalink)
Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 701	Re: Potw 9-18/9-24 Forbidden lover, best friend In some kind of weak existence I hear you When all the day has gone And all that there is left is Darkness I see you As I move from place to place I listen for The harsh caw of the crow And I feel you Peoples faces interchange in traffic Looking up in thoughtlessness You appear And I lose you Depending on my carelessness Tripping over my own reverie I remember our adventure And I fall for you. Withdrawing from you is the hardest thing The music bringing me back I refuse I savor you I hope someday we can meet again Until then I miss you __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Sep 22, 2006, 09:31 AM	#4 (permalink)
Soldat of life RPG Lord and Master/Poet Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada) Posts: 869 Thanks: 1 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 6,075	Re: Potw 9-18/9-24 White light Inside or out, We all are blessed. With the feeling of hope inside of us, Nothing stands stronger than oneself. Granting a moment of peace throughout, Feeling it touch you and feeling good inside. Holding, grasping, absorbing, Reaching out to it all. Floating in your mind, Calling out to everyone out there. Running on an endless thought, Crying out a single word. While the wait may be long, There is no despair in the air. As the answer comes from somewhere, There is only one thing expressed. Fleeting ideas that are no more, Granting white light that is warmer than love. __________________ Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^ Poetry Corner
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Sep 22, 2006, 03:55 PM	#5 (permalink)
raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,547	Re: Potw 9-18/9-24 *An Optimistic Core* Darkness gives rise of sadness, Sadness that causes several sins, Sins that make a person feel, Feel submission to eternal defeat. Psyche's being harshly stroked, Stroked by the past memories, Memories of a hundred people, People who never shown concern. Blaming all of it to cruel life, Life that is always unjust and unfair, Unfair in the sense of choosing, Choosing a being susceptible to losing. I have been to that road before, Before I met a special someone, Someone who became my sunshine, Sunshine that saved me from darkness. Giving emotional warmth, Warmth that I once thought, Thought it was mere dream, Dream now he makes to reality. This optimistic core shows beauty, Beauty in everything he sees, Sees positive out of the negative, Negative is a thing he will never miss. “In spite of the troubles, He never gave up hope An optimistic feeling that Everything is going to turn out well.” __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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Sep 22, 2006, 09:48 PM	#6 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 409	Re: Potw 9-18/9-24 Shining eyes shining tears lovely life all you can hear the rays of light coming to clear all those bad feelings u had near hope is existed in ur heart when you're feeling sad it gives you another chance to keep hoping of a new start and being surronded by love stars shining in ur eyes waiting for the moment waiting for the sign waiting for a cheer all that u can think of is in here inside the heart and hopes and eternal dreams __________________ perdoname michelle! Last edited by Baal; Sep 22, 2006 at 09:51 PM.
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