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    Practice.2- Ballad Poetry!

    Now, we all have some practice on how to write a quatrain. Let's see if we can write beautiful ballads!!!

    An Endless Rain

    I stand by in the clouds.
    As heavy thunder rolls in,
    as misty rain falls in shrouds,
    hiding the sunlight which is now put to an end.

    One single tear drops down my cheek,
    as I watch you standing there,
    as you did for many weeks,
    wondering why I care.

    You tore my life into shreads,
    you broke my heart,
    but I picked up my life that was thousands of threads,
    I placed together my heart that was tons of parts.

    Then you looked above,
    and I saw your face.
    You were shining with a moment of love.
    As you were radiant with God's grace.

    Then finally you closed your eyes,
    and said" Please lord, release me from this pain."
    "My friend has tried many times,
    but has failed like an endless rain."
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry!

    Empty

    The invisible man waits
    Waits for the pending silence-
    The refuge never meant to come
    The calm concealed by chaos

    He has been lost
    Unseen and forgotten
    A blank memory
    And empty in their eyes

    He has seen them all
    He watches the lies
    They are blind in an empty world
    A chaotic meaninglessness

    So he searches-
    Searches for the awaiting peace
    Hidden behind their empty life
    Growing farther away.
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    choas can not be avoided
    i't will doom you if you try
    it will destroy anything
    willing in it's way

    come to it
    you can't give into it
    destruction it causes
    between the worlds

    fight fight fight against it
    it still will never work
    guns swords weapons cannot stop it
    it will just cause it

    a force stronger then any man
    could ever be or any mere dream
    you will be hunted by it even if you run
    it won't show sorrow none at all
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    Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry!

    Finally another practice xD


    Inside the mind

    He lingers upon a single thought,
    Wondering what will come next.
    Wasting away in doubt,
    Loosing sight of life.

    Scenarios that he creates,
    Follow routes of his inner self.
    Creating links that bind,
    His ever growing mind.

    Wishing that it wasn't so hard,
    Quality time simply out of reach.
    Remembering again the past times,
    Falling apart once more confined.

    Weary of the time at hand,
    Searching for a reasons to exist.
    Yielding to a giving hand,
    Reaching out finally set free.
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    Forbidden Memories

    All the things that he said
    Keeps on playing in my head
    All those things that he said
    Makes me cry in my bed.

    All the hurts that he caused me,
    All the pain that he repaid me,
    All the suffering that he offered,
    Triggers me to do the forbidden.

    I will keep on running
    I will keep on screaming
    I will keep on escaping
    From the memories of him.

    I will keep on crying
    Tears continuously falling
    I will keep on laughing,
    Until mind meets insane.


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    Haunted Dreams (No Good)

    Dreams opens up wonders
    Makes things appear to be seen
    Memories or over the future
    I sleep having happy dreams
    But be awaken by a nightmare

    Tears fall having visions of it
    Alone in my room with no comfort
    Hours up holding myself
    I scream but no good

    Blood lying on the floor
    Die love ones everywhere
    I cry and scream "It's not real!!"
    But its no good

    I feel him holding me
    I hear his voice speak to me
    But where I look around
    I see no one there
    Is my mind playing with me?

    My dreams are haunting me
    Makes me cry and scream
    Yet its no good
    Why these haunting dreams
    Please make them go away.....
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    You told me a lie,
    You told me you'd never let me go free
    A couple of months later, all I can do is sigh,
    you threw me to the ground, six feet deep.

    I spent three months digging
    you spent that time in your room
    you'd hope I'd be forgiving
    but now, my anger will rise soon

    Finally you know the truth.
    I finally got it off my chest
    What needed to be said came out in this booth,
    now I can start life fresh
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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    A feverish night over comes us
    Plunging into bottles
    Beauty’s bar has been lowered
    By a six pack of ale

    Laughs explode from our bellies
    Belching out a song of drunken mastery
    Reddened faces spell a story
    Glazed over eyed comradery

    Enjoying the night we won’t remember
    Spilling honesty like wine
    Moving unseen boundaries happily
    Exposing benefits to disconnected friendships

    Watching the night inch away
    Using toilets as pillows
    A cool surface to cool the nerves
    Losing composure modestly

    Eyelids yield to an unwelcome sun
    Headaches giving evidence unclearly
    An unquenchable thirst moves me
    Unaware of last night’s intoxicated foxtrot

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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