Practice.2- Ballad Poetry!

*Kasai* · Aug 12, 2006, 06:55 AM

Now, we all have some practice on how to write a quatrain. Let's see if we can write beautiful ballads!!!

An Endless Rain

I stand by in the clouds.
As heavy thunder rolls in,
as misty rain falls in shrouds,
hiding the sunlight which is now put to an end.

One single tear drops down my cheek,
as I watch you standing there,
as you did for many weeks,
wondering why I care.

You tore my life into shreads,
you broke my heart,
but I picked up my life that was thousands of threads,
I placed together my heart that was tons of parts.

Then you looked above,
and I saw your face.
You were shining with a moment of love.
As you were radiant with God's grace.

Then finally you closed your eyes,
and said" Please lord, release me from this pain."
"My friend has tried many times,
but has failed like an endless rain."

BrightShadow_96 · Aug 12, 2006, 02:16 PM

Empty

The invisible man waits
Waits for the pending silence-
The refuge never meant to come
The calm concealed by chaos

He has been lost
Unseen and forgotten
A blank memory
And empty in their eyes

He has seen them all
He watches the lies
They are blind in an empty world
A chaotic meaninglessness

So he searches-
Searches for the awaiting peace
Hidden behind their empty life
Growing farther away.

ROCKANIME2007 · Aug 13, 2006, 12:53 AM

choas can not be avoided
i't will doom you if you try
it will destroy anything
willing in it's way

come to it
you can't give into it
destruction it causes
between the worlds

fight fight fight against it
it still will never work
guns swords weapons cannot stop it
it will just cause it

a force stronger then any man
could ever be or any mere dream
you will be hunted by it even if you run
it won't show sorrow none at all

Soldat of life · Aug 13, 2006, 12:42 PM

Finally another practice xD

Inside the mind

He lingers upon a single thought,
Wondering what will come next.
Wasting away in doubt,
Loosing sight of life.

Scenarios that he creates,
Follow routes of his inner self.
Creating links that bind,
His ever growing mind.

Wishing that it wasn't so hard,
Quality time simply out of reach.
Remembering again the past times,
Falling apart once more confined.

Weary of the time at hand,
Searching for a reasons to exist.
Yielding to a giving hand,
Reaching out finally set free.

raja_psyche · Aug 14, 2006, 04:37 AM

Forbidden Memories

All the things that he said
Keeps on playing in my head
All those things that he said
Makes me cry in my bed.

All the hurts that he caused me,
All the pain that he repaid me,
All the suffering that he offered,
Triggers me to do the forbidden.

I will keep on running
I will keep on screaming
I will keep on escaping
From the memories of him.

I will keep on crying
Tears continuously falling
I will keep on laughing,
Until mind meets insane.

*HieisLove* · Aug 15, 2006, 11:41 AM

Haunted Dreams (No Good)

Dreams opens up wonders
Makes things appear to be seen
Memories or over the future
I sleep having happy dreams
But be awaken by a nightmare

Tears fall having visions of it
Alone in my room with no comfort
Hours up holding myself
I scream but no good

Blood lying on the floor
Die love ones everywhere
I cry and scream "It's not real!!"
But its no good

I feel him holding me
I hear his voice speak to me
But where I look around
I see no one there
Is my mind playing with me?

My dreams are haunting me
Makes me cry and scream
Yet its no good
Why these haunting dreams
Please make them go away.....

*N.Y._Soulja* · Aug 15, 2006, 04:08 PM

You told me a lie,
You told me you'd never let me go free
A couple of months later, all I can do is sigh,
you threw me to the ground, six feet deep.

I spent three months digging
you spent that time in your room
you'd hope I'd be forgiving
but now, my anger will rise soon

Finally you know the truth.
I finally got it off my chest
What needed to be said came out in this booth,
now I can start life fresh

Nympho · Aug 15, 2006, 08:18 PM

A feverish night over comes us
Plunging into bottles
Beauty’s bar has been lowered
By a six pack of ale

Laughs explode from our bellies
Belching out a song of drunken mastery
Reddened faces spell a story
Glazed over eyed comradery

Enjoying the night we won’t remember
Spilling honesty like wine
Moving unseen boundaries happily
Exposing benefits to disconnected friendships

Watching the night inch away
Using toilets as pillows
A cool surface to cool the nerves
Losing composure modestly

Eyelids yield to an unwelcome sun
Headaches giving evidence unclearly
An unquenchable thirst moves me
Unaware of last night’s intoxicated foxtrot

*Baal* · Aug 20, 2006, 05:59 PM

We ment to be
My sweet sunflower
that I await in the tower,
We ment to have all the power.
Why we took the easy way
why we took the what i say,
It brought boulders to our life
That destroy our perfect path
to 'new' life.

We ment to be the happiest couple;
That make us perfect and 'no' trouble.
I fell becouse of a pebble called 'trust'
That make you continue without me.
In that moment of the fall
I fell evrything so call,

no shakes, no words dispaer
The tower is save
it will not be teared
my sweet princes
We ment to be
but you teach me how to 'belive'.

*HieisLove* · Aug 22, 2006, 10:47 AM

Late nights in
A room all alone
Fear that creeps
up my spine

Him I fear the most
Him that hurts me so
Emotionally and physically
Him that loves doing this

The bed I hate to sleep in
Been tainted by whats
Happened on it
I break down at membories

Blood, tears, and semen
Stained the sheets
The evidence been washed away
But membories are left in my head

The marks left on my body
Aren't seen by another other
Then master himself
No one has known of him

All that's heard outside
The door of my room is
Silence so no one knows
Of the truth

Pain runs through my body
Tears are cried for my closed eyes
Master is what I'm ordered to called him
A worthless being he says I am

I hate him
I hate him
I hate him
I HATE HIM!!!!!

He loves to see
My pain, my sadness, be hopeless
A turn on it causes him
Pleasure he feels when he force me

I want to tell all
I want my family to help me
But none know except my sister
For that I feel the worst that she knows

Why is what I ask
Cry and plead is what I do
A hit is what I recieve
A loving view it is to him

I'm tainted
I'm marked
I'm a slave
Of his having

ROCKANIME2007 · Aug 22, 2006, 02:23 PM

a message

a message of hope
hope is coming
light returns darkness flees
sadness goes away like healing a bandaged sore

a message of hope
celebrate as light returns here
it comes to a place were darkness flees
smile it's has been long for all Is happy now

Aug 12, 2006, 06:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! Now, we all have some practice on how to write a quatrain. Let's see if we can write beautiful ballads!!! An Endless Rain I stand by in the clouds. As heavy thunder rolls in, as misty rain falls in shrouds, hiding the sunlight which is now put to an end. One single tear drops down my cheek, as I watch you standing there, as you did for many weeks, wondering why I care. You tore my life into shreads, you broke my heart, but I picked up my life that was thousands of threads, I placed together my heart that was tons of parts. Then you looked above, and I saw your face. You were shining with a moment of love. As you were radiant with God's grace. Then finally you closed your eyes, and said" Please lord, release me from this pain." "My friend has tried many times, but has failed like an endless rain." __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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BrightShadow_96 遁走より本当 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Inside Reality & Serenity Posts: 571 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,375	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! Empty The invisible man waits Waits for the pending silence- The refuge never meant to come The calm concealed by chaos He has been lost Unseen and forgotten A blank memory And empty in their eyes He has seen them all He watches the lies They are blind in an empty world A chaotic meaninglessness So he searches- Searches for the awaiting peace Hidden behind their empty life Growing farther away. __________________ Last edited by BrightShadow_96; Aug 12, 2006 at 10:38 PM.
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ROCKANIME2007 Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! choas can not be avoided i't will doom you if you try it will destroy anything willing in it's way come to it you can't give into it destruction it causes between the worlds fight fight fight against it it still will never work guns swords weapons cannot stop it it will just cause it a force stronger then any man could ever be or any mere dream you will be hunted by it even if you run it won't show sorrow none at all Last edited by ROCKANIME2007; Aug 13, 2006 at 11:57 PM.
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raja_psyche Otaku Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 5 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,527	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! Forbidden Memories All the things that he said Keeps on playing in my head All those things that he said Makes me cry in my bed. All the hurts that he caused me, All the pain that he repaid me, All the suffering that he offered, Triggers me to do the forbidden. I will keep on running I will keep on screaming I will keep on escaping From the memories of him. I will keep on crying Tears continuously falling I will keep on laughing, Until mind meets insane. __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,084	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! Haunted Dreams (No Good) Dreams opens up wonders Makes things appear to be seen Memories or over the future I sleep having happy dreams But be awaken by a nightmare Tears fall having visions of it Alone in my room with no comfort Hours up holding myself I scream but no good Blood lying on the floor Die love ones everywhere I cry and scream "It's not real!!" But its no good I feel him holding me I hear his voice speak to me But where I look around I see no one there Is my mind playing with me? My dreams are haunting me Makes me cry and scream Yet its no good Why these haunting dreams Please make them go away..... __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~ Last edited by HieisLove; Aug 15, 2006 at 05:41 PM.
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N.Y._Soulja ¥_Gankutsuou_¥ Join Date: May 2005 Location: ¿Geez, where the hell am I? Posts: 600 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 326	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! You told me a lie, You told me you'd never let me go free A couple of months later, all I can do is sigh, you threw me to the ground, six feet deep. I spent three months digging you spent that time in your room you'd hope I'd be forgiving but now, my anger will rise soon Finally you know the truth. I finally got it off my chest What needed to be said came out in this booth, now I can start life fresh __________________ Death Is Certain; Its Hour Uncertain There Is No Need For Redemption
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 701	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! A feverish night over comes us Plunging into bottles Beauty’s bar has been lowered By a six pack of ale Laughs explode from our bellies Belching out a song of drunken mastery Reddened faces spell a story Glazed over eyed comradery Enjoying the night we won’t remember Spilling honesty like wine Moving unseen boundaries happily Exposing benefits to disconnected friendships Watching the night inch away Using toilets as pillows A cool surface to cool the nerves Losing composure modestly Eyelids yield to an unwelcome sun Headaches giving evidence unclearly An unquenchable thirst moves me Unaware of last night’s intoxicated foxtrot __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 309	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! We ment to be My sweet sunflower that I await in the tower, We ment to have all the power. Why we took the easy way why we took the what i say, It brought boulders to our life That destroy our perfect path to 'new' life. We ment to be the happiest couple; That make us perfect and 'no' trouble. I fell becouse of a pebble called 'trust' That make you continue without me. In that moment of the fall I fell evrything so call, no shakes, no words dispaer The tower is save it will not be teared my sweet princes We ment to be but you teach me how to 'belive'. __________________ perdoname michelle!
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HieisLove Getting Married 3-14-09 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: at home doing wedding planning Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,084	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! Late nights in A room all alone Fear that creeps up my spine Him I fear the most Him that hurts me so Emotionally and physically Him that loves doing this The bed I hate to sleep in Been tainted by whats Happened on it I break down at membories Blood, tears, and semen Stained the sheets The evidence been washed away But membories are left in my head The marks left on my body Aren't seen by another other Then master himself No one has known of him All that's heard outside The door of my room is Silence so no one knows Of the truth Pain runs through my body Tears are cried for my closed eyes Master is what I'm ordered to called him A worthless being he says I am I hate him I hate him I hate him I HATE HIM!!!!! He loves to see My pain, my sadness, be hopeless A turn on it causes him Pleasure he feels when he force me I want to tell all I want my family to help me But none know except my sister For that I feel the worst that she knows Why is what I ask Cry and plead is what I do A hit is what I recieve A loving view it is to him I'm tainted I'm marked I'm a slave Of his having __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~ Last edited by HieisLove; Aug 22, 2006 at 01:05 PM.
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ROCKANIME2007 Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: Practice.2- Ballad Poetry! a message a message of hope hope is coming light returns darkness flees sadness goes away like healing a bandaged sore a message of hope celebrate as light returns here it comes to a place were darkness flees smile it's has been long for all Is happy now Last edited by ROCKANIME2007; Aug 22, 2006 at 02:25 PM.
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