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    Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    Do not post here if you have not participated in practice.1 - End Rhyme. Onc you have done that, then you may post here.

    I'd like to see some end rhyme poems here. So, let your creative juices flow.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Asphyxiation

    The life I live is hell.
    I am stuck in a worthless shell.

    My world has many gears,
    that turn by the power of my fears.

    Everyday there was nothing new,
    until the moment I met you.

    Soaring through the sky was our love,
    like a great flock of endless doves.

    I never thought I'd hear my life sing,
    or feel the joy that you bring.

    I just wish this would only last,
    instead of you becoming my past.

    I am no longer in the abyss,
    I float in the softness of your kiss.
    Last edited by Kasai; Aug 22, 2006 at 05:51 PM.
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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    Slave

    I'm told I'm worthless
    Somewhat I'm left breathless

    Used to think I was pure
    Now I'm just unsure

    Is it what I believe?
    Why a beating I recieve?

    Here I sit in tears
    My cries he hears

    On a bed in chains
    Sheets covered with stains

    Abuse my body get
    My face always wet

    I tried to stay in the light
    But now its leaving my sight
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    ''Eternal love''



    I was wrong leas i could be
    to let u go way from me
    ill regret that forever

    But now i see a shine of light
    i just want to do thing right

    We could be better than before
    now i can love u even more
    this time im sure

    Never let u go
    never going to give up my soul

    hold ur body close to mine
    and have eternal love forever.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    Freedom

    The world where I reside,
    I fly along it as a ride.

    Cycling endlessly to a new destination,
    We follow each other in total fascination.

    Creating new things to do together,
    Rejoicing of our time entwined forever.

    And yet I am alone in my mind,
    To truly understand what lies behind.

    A tear of joy passes beyond her figure,
    My soul cries out as I cannot linger.

    Deep within lies my true beliefs,
    Under a tree of many leafs.

    Riding once again the endless flow,
    I free myself of all that is hallow.
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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    I hate rhyming. And forcing myself out of my free verse routine was a little hard.


    There’s an irritation in my senses
    Breaking down my defenses

    My breath has come short
    Blowing out discomforting coughs support

    Scarlet vertical gaze
    Thin damp rag on my face

    I’m cheering on my sneeze
    Removing pressure at ease

    Shallow inhalation
    Laying down my arms in submission

    I sleep to regenerate vigor
    Like an honorable defeated soldier
    Last edited by Nympho; Aug 22, 2006 at 09:16 PM.

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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    Kitties Meowing
    Doggies Barking

    Chickens Boking
    Cowsees Mooing

    Wolvies Howling
    Pumas Growling

    Every Thing Speaking
    Every One Talking

    Every Body has something to Say
    E Specially Today


    but from Where the Voice is Comin'
    Don't Mean Nothin'

    All Together Created
    All Together Related



    ^_^ i'm a hippie kinda!

    p.s.: dammit... that doesn't flow very well... O.o could that be symbolic of something? ::Twilight Zone Theme Song::
    Last edited by Abu Dhabi; Aug 23, 2006 at 12:12 AM. Reason: An Observation

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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme


    Spring

    The sun is brightly shining,
    As the snow starts melting.

    The cold wind begins blowing,
    As the ice upon the trees are falling.

    The flower buds are blooming,
    The butterflies start nectar-gathering.

    The birds are happily chirping,
    Also, the bees are busily buzzing.

    The children are joyfully playing,
    By the stream that starts flowing.


    ~_~

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

    Jekyll & Hyde

    A monster lurks inside me
    Where is it from an evil deed?

    The Jeykll outside
    but Hyde wants a stride

    He's finally free,
    to do as he please.

    His sins will send us to Hell
    The blood on my hands, with a great smell

    DAMN YOU HYDE! SET ME FREE!
    Can't you see? You are ME!

    Deep inside...
    YOU ARE HYDE!

    No.... NEVER!
    YES! FOREVER!
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

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    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?

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