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Old Aug 22, 2006, 02:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Practice.2 - End Rhyme

Do not post here if you have not participated in practice.1 - End Rhyme. Onc you have done that, then you may post here.

I'd like to see some end rhyme poems here. So, let your creative juices flow.

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Asphyxiation

The life I live is hell.
I am stuck in a worthless shell.

My world has many gears,
that turn by the power of my fears.

Everyday there was nothing new,
until the moment I met you.

Soaring through the sky was our love,
like a great flock of endless doves.

I never thought I'd hear my life sing,
or feel the joy that you bring.

I just wish this would only last,
instead of you becoming my past.

I am no longer in the abyss,
I float in the softness of your kiss.
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Old Aug 22, 2006, 05:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

Slave

I'm told I'm worthless
Somewhat I'm left breathless

Used to think I was pure
Now I'm just unsure

Is it what I believe?
Why a beating I recieve?

Here I sit in tears
My cries he hears

On a bed in chains
Sheets covered with stains

Abuse my body get
My face always wet

I tried to stay in the light
But now its leaving my sight
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Old Aug 22, 2006, 05:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

''Eternal love''



I was wrong leas i could be
to let u go way from me
ill regret that forever

But now i see a shine of light
i just want to do thing right

We could be better than before
now i can love u even more
this time im sure

Never let u go
never going to give up my soul

hold ur body close to mine
and have eternal love forever.
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Old Aug 22, 2006, 07:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Freedom

The world where I reside,
I fly along it as a ride.

Cycling endlessly to a new destination,
We follow each other in total fascination.

Creating new things to do together,
Rejoicing of our time entwined forever.

And yet I am alone in my mind,
To truly understand what lies behind.

A tear of joy passes beyond her figure,
My soul cries out as I cannot linger.

Deep within lies my true beliefs,
Under a tree of many leafs.

Riding once again the endless flow,
I free myself of all that is hallow.
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Old Aug 22, 2006, 09:08 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

I hate rhyming. And forcing myself out of my free verse routine was a little hard.


There’s an irritation in my senses
Breaking down my defenses

My breath has come short
Blowing out discomforting coughs support

Scarlet vertical gaze
Thin damp rag on my face

I’m cheering on my sneeze
Removing pressure at ease

Shallow inhalation
Laying down my arms in submission

I sleep to regenerate vigor
Like an honorable defeated soldier
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Old Aug 23, 2006, 12:10 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

Kitties Meowing
Doggies Barking

Chickens Boking
Cowsees Mooing

Wolvies Howling
Pumas Growling

Every Thing Speaking
Every One Talking

Every Body has something to Say
E Specially Today


but from Where the Voice is Comin'
Don't Mean Nothin'

All Together Created
All Together Related



^_^ i'm a hippie kinda!

p.s.: dammit... that doesn't flow very well... O.o could that be symbolic of something? ::Twilight Zone Theme Song::
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Old Aug 26, 2006, 12:12 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Spring

The sun is brightly shining,
As the snow starts melting.

The cold wind begins blowing,
As the ice upon the trees are falling.

The flower buds are blooming,
The butterflies start nectar-gathering.

The birds are happily chirping,
Also, the bees are busily buzzing.

The children are joyfully playing,
By the stream that starts flowing.


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Old Aug 27, 2006, 10:02 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Jekyll & Hyde

A monster lurks inside me
Where is it from an evil deed?

The Jeykll outside
but Hyde wants a stride

He's finally free,
to do as he please.

His sins will send us to Hell
The blood on my hands, with a great smell

DAMN YOU HYDE! SET ME FREE!
Can't you see? You are ME!

Deep inside...
YOU ARE HYDE!

No.... NEVER!
YES! FOREVER!
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Old Aug 27, 2006, 12:59 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: Practice.2 - End Rhyme

I'm guessing the majority of the members dislike rhyming? Lol.
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