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    Workout.1 - Free Verse

    Free Verse: Is poetry which does not require meter or a rhyme scheme.

    Meter: Rhythm or pattern of syllables in the lines of a poem.

    Post any free verse poems you have here. ^^
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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    (Me dunno like much free verses there so empty.. o well here goes nothing.. an dont say i stoled this free verse from u )

    Algebra

    numbers all the way
    so many problems
    that are over my head
    i get confused in the second
    and get bad points in it's test

    my head burns like calling for help
    cuz the exercises are so hard to resolve
    the existence of algebra
    gives me a lot of questions
    that get me no where in my mind

    weeee... im like in the space
    of infinity problems to solve
    i cant keep the letters on my head
    or ill explode and end in eternal
    dudas.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    To Noah Love Mom

    You shadow my insides
    Linger within my darkness
    Make everyday yours and all I live for
    Your amber lining
    Set aflame
    Burning a piece of my heart away
    I have never met you
    But you already mean everything to me
    Taking every breath so much deeper
    To fill your lungs
    Your heart beat echoes

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    This is free.





    .................................................. Free to go here.

    ... Free to go there.








    Free to go anywhere.
    Free to be here with you.

    Free to be there with them.

    Free to exist.
    Free to not.






    Everything thing around here is



















    free.

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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    this poem is one of the ones i posted in AO. this poem is made by me entirely. this poem is inspired from daddy long legs. hmmm... some of the lines do rhyme... but there are parts that don't rhyme also. this poem is long... wahehehe! ^^



    Monsieur Smith

    Looking outside my window pane,
    My heart is filled with antagonizing pain
    As I set my black eyes upon a family
    Who are walking together cheerfully.

    My head is being stabbed
    With helplessness so sharp
    That I will never find someone
    Who’ll make the bleeding stop.

    It’s been fourteen lonesome years,
    That no caring father and mother,
    That no loving brothers or sisters,
    Are at hand to cuddle me in cold winter.

    My mind is filled with endless longing,
    My soul is in eternal wandering,
    My heart is in infinite suffering,
    That I will spend all my life in the orphanage.

    The hurtful thoughts almost invades
    My mind that nearly fades.
    Then, I heard a knocking sound
    That makes my heart pound.

    Hearing a loud voice outside that door
    Telling me go to the Office of Mrs. Lippett
    My heart continues to ponder,
    The reason I really don’t get.

    I opened the wooden door,
    Not knowing what is in store,
    I see a fleeting impression of the man
    The impression consisted entirely of tallness

    He is waving his arm towards an automobile
    That is waiting in the curved drive
    As it sprang into motion and approached,
    Head on for an instant.

    The glaring headlights threw his shadow
    Sharply against the wall inside
    The shadow pictured grotesquely
    Elongated legs and arms.

    That run along the floor and
    Up the wall of the corridor
    It looked, for all the world, like a huge
    Wavering daddy-long-legs.

    That image takes my breath away,
    Knowing how tall that man may be.
    I walked hurriedly to Mrs. Lippett’s office
    Before my excitement will cease.

    Then the ever so cold Mrs. Lippett
    Asked me if a saw a man
    As I walked into her office.
    I told her I only saw his elongated shadow

    Then, ever so cold Mrs. Lippett
    Begins to reveal the news
    That a Monsieur loved my poem
    And is now sending me to college.

    Hearing the news made my heart
    Feel that this is a brand new start.
    It feels that my soul suddenly shed its skin
    Into happiness from the loneliness it has been.

    Mrs. Lippett now tells me directly
    The Mr. John Smith is the kind monsieur
    Who sends orphans into college
    For the reason she also understand.

    I run outside her office
    Excitement whirls in to my mind
    Hoping that I, myself will find
    And thank the kind Monsieur.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    Silent Snow

    The snow falls so languidly,
    oh so languidly
    down to the ground
    resting on my feet
    cloaking my cold face-
    as cold as the snow flakes.

    Society shuffles past silently,
    oh so silently
    Walking around blindly in the snow

    Waiting for there lives to activate
    Ever-searching for the pending silence-
    All of the silence still to come.

    Nothing is everywhere,
    but everywhere is nothing,
    Nothing compared to the real world
    This real world of silent snow

    I am apart from this blindness,
    In so many ways.
    For I am the snow-
    Watching the people,
    Watching their flaws,
    Watching their lives.

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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    Forever My Love

    Ya opened up my heart
    Held me in your arms for the longest
    Them sweet kisses you gave me
    I know I want to

    Stay with you
    Be with you
    Forever and ever
    Forever and ever

    My heart feels like it’s
    Going to burst
    Going to burst
    I know I love you

    The burning love
    I know for you
    Did you know you’re on my mind?
    You probably didn’t know

    Are you my soul mate?
    Because it feels like destiny
    With I feel complete
    Do you feel same?

    Stay with you
    Be with you
    Forever and ever
    Forever and ever

    My heart feels like it’s
    Going to burst
    Going to burst
    I know I love you

    Words can’t explain it
    We’re too far I can’t show it
    You accepted my heart
    I yours in return
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse

    Watery eyes

    A look upon your life,
    The tears that fall freely.
    Gracefully you look back,
    At the time that are no more.

    Hoping for it all to come back,
    Blooming about your imagination.
    Holding dearly what is most important,
    Feeling the doubt fade away.
    Awakening to a new world,
    Opening your eyes to joy.

    Breaking apart all that is wrong,
    Chanting the fears away from your ears.
    Closing off the word never from your mind,
    Tearing away the barriers that were so strong.
    Erasing what was once a mistake,
    Clearing the way to a new hope.
    Racing upon a lasting raceway,
    Stoping before what is reality.

    Not truly understanding,
    Letting things be as they are.
    Accepting the world in all its saddness,
    Cherishing every moment that is not shallow.
    Showing emotion to every event,
    Glorifying the day that has begun.
    Prancing about what is best,
    Filling a half full cup.
    Looking at the sky so high...
    ...Flying freely above the clouds accompanied by the stars.
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    My favorite philosopher:
    Hassun

    Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^
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