Workout.1 - Free Verse

*Kasai* · Sep 11, 2006, 06:54 PM

Free Verse: Is poetry which does not require meter or a rhyme scheme.

Meter: Rhythm or pattern of syllables in the lines of a poem.

Post any free verse poems you have here. ^^

*Baal* · Sep 11, 2006, 08:04 PM

(Me dunno like much free verses there so empty.. o well here goes nothing.. an dont say i stoled this free verse from u

)

Algebra

numbers all the way
so many problems
that are over my head
i get confused in the second
and get bad points in it's test

my head burns like calling for help
cuz the exercises are so hard to resolve
the existence of algebra
gives me a lot of questions
that get me no where in my mind

weeee... im like in the space
of infinity problems to solve
i cant keep the letters on my head
or ill explode and end in eternal
dudas.

Nympho · Sep 11, 2006, 08:15 PM

To Noah Love Mom

You shadow my insides
Linger within my darkness
Make everyday yours and all I live for
Your amber lining
Set aflame
Burning a piece of my heart away
I have never met you
But you already mean everything to me
Taking every breath so much deeper
To fill your lungs
Your heart beat echoes

*Abu Dhabi* · Sep 12, 2006, 11:36 PM

This is free.

.................................................. Free to go here.

... Free to go there.

Free to go anywhere.
Free to be here with you.

Free to be there with them.

Free to exist.
Free to not.

Everything thing around here is

free.

raja_psyche · Sep 13, 2006, 02:01 AM

this poem is one of the ones i posted in AO. this poem is made by me entirely. this poem is inspired from daddy long legs. hmmm... some of the lines do rhyme... but there are parts that don't rhyme also. this poem is long... wahehehe! ^^

Monsieur Smith

Looking outside my window pane,
My heart is filled with antagonizing pain
As I set my black eyes upon a family
Who are walking together cheerfully.

My head is being stabbed
With helplessness so sharp
That I will never find someone
Who’ll make the bleeding stop.

It’s been fourteen lonesome years,
That no caring father and mother,
That no loving brothers or sisters,
Are at hand to cuddle me in cold winter.

My mind is filled with endless longing,
My soul is in eternal wandering,
My heart is in infinite suffering,
That I will spend all my life in the orphanage.

The hurtful thoughts almost invades
My mind that nearly fades.
Then, I heard a knocking sound
That makes my heart pound.

Hearing a loud voice outside that door
Telling me go to the Office of Mrs. Lippett
My heart continues to ponder,
The reason I really don’t get.

I opened the wooden door,
Not knowing what is in store,
I see a fleeting impression of the man
The impression consisted entirely of tallness

He is waving his arm towards an automobile
That is waiting in the curved drive
As it sprang into motion and approached,
Head on for an instant.

The glaring headlights threw his shadow
Sharply against the wall inside
The shadow pictured grotesquely
Elongated legs and arms.

That run along the floor and
Up the wall of the corridor
It looked, for all the world, like a huge
Wavering daddy-long-legs.

That image takes my breath away,
Knowing how tall that man may be.
I walked hurriedly to Mrs. Lippett’s office
Before my excitement will cease.

Then the ever so cold Mrs. Lippett
Asked me if a saw a man
As I walked into her office.
I told her I only saw his elongated shadow

Then, ever so cold Mrs. Lippett
Begins to reveal the news
That a Monsieur loved my poem
And is now sending me to college.

Hearing the news made my heart
Feel that this is a brand new start.
It feels that my soul suddenly shed its skin
Into happiness from the loneliness it has been.

Mrs. Lippett now tells me directly
The Mr. John Smith is the kind monsieur
Who sends orphans into college
For the reason she also understand.

I run outside her office
Excitement whirls in to my mind
Hoping that I, myself will find
And thank the kind Monsieur.

BrightShadow_96 · Sep 13, 2006, 06:55 PM

Silent Snow

The snow falls so languidly,
oh so languidly
down to the ground
resting on my feet
cloaking my cold face-
as cold as the snow flakes.

Society shuffles past silently,
oh so silently
Walking around blindly in the snow

Waiting for there lives to activate
Ever-searching for the pending silence-
All of the silence still to come.

Nothing is everywhere,
but everywhere is nothing,
Nothing compared to the real world
This real world of silent snow

I am apart from this blindness,
In so many ways.
For I am the snow-
Watching the people,
Watching their flaws,
Watching their lives.

HieisLove · Sep 15, 2006, 09:59 AM

Forever My Love

Ya opened up my heart
Held me in your arms for the longest
Them sweet kisses you gave me
I know I want to

Stay with you
Be with you
Forever and ever
Forever and ever

My heart feels like it’s
Going to burst
Going to burst
I know I love you

The burning love
I know for you
Did you know you’re on my mind?
You probably didn’t know

Are you my soul mate?
Because it feels like destiny
With I feel complete
Do you feel same?

Stay with you
Be with you
Forever and ever
Forever and ever

My heart feels like it’s
Going to burst
Going to burst
I know I love you

Words can’t explain it
We’re too far I can’t show it
You accepted my heart
I yours in return

Soldat of life · Sep 16, 2006, 09:24 PM

Watery eyes

A look upon your life,
The tears that fall freely.
Gracefully you look back,
At the time that are no more.

Hoping for it all to come back,
Blooming about your imagination.
Holding dearly what is most important,
Feeling the doubt fade away.
Awakening to a new world,
Opening your eyes to joy.

Breaking apart all that is wrong,
Chanting the fears away from your ears.
Closing off the word never from your mind,
Tearing away the barriers that were so strong.
Erasing what was once a mistake,
Clearing the way to a new hope.
Racing upon a lasting raceway,
Stoping before what is reality.

Not truly understanding,
Letting things be as they are.
Accepting the world in all its saddness,
Cherishing every moment that is not shallow.
Showing emotion to every event,
Glorifying the day that has begun.
Prancing about what is best,
Filling a half full cup.
Looking at the sky so high...
...Flying freely above the clouds accompanied by the stars.

ROCKANIME2007 · Sep 17, 2006, 02:33 AM

down town

this is crap
the stuff down town
low price stuff wonderful not
they brake cause of the third rate
making

downtown

huge towers big trees
dead leaves
old music stores
the size of my house
but still life is great
downtown

HieisLove · Sep 18, 2006, 09:59 AM

Her Insanity

Darkness sqruims in the night
Bleed of depression
Lifeless shell lay under
The crying sky

Pleading of help
One dies hopelessly
Dull eyes stare at nothing
Loniness drive one to nothing

Finally a place to run to
Vanishing soul travels
Released all doubts
Memories gone finally blank

Cuts of the flesh
Left on her wrists
Pills spilled on the ground
Broken glass stained with blood

Pain the ran through her
Tears ran down her face
Words ran through her mind
Doubts didn't stop her

Unhappiness;
No love;
No hope;
Her insanity

hyuuga13 · Oct 09, 2006, 12:44 PM

I know i posted this elsewhere but i wanted your opinions

To what do I owe the pleasure
Your face outside my window
Ghastly white like fresh fallen snow
Your alluring eyes grip hold my soul

I leave my bed and open my window
Allowing you entrance upon my threshold
Your eyes hold mine in a transfixed gaze
My fate is sealed in an unknown maze

You come close to me
Your warm breath upon my cheek
I feel the sharpness of your fangs
As they graze the jaw-line of my neck

They slowly sink into my flesh
As pale as the moon on a summer night
Crimson fluid spills down my chest
Life as I know it is drained from my neck

Slowly the room begins to fade
I start to slide from your embrace
I collapse to the floor hardly conscious
I'm so weak I'm barely breathing

Your shadow falls across me
As I lay there in the dark
Your voice an echo in my head
A choice is placed before I'm dead

I try to decline your offer
But my soul accepts your dark gift
The pain rushes through me again
Blood fills my mind and vision

I feel my strength return
Like liquid fire in my veins
I slowly sit upright and turn towards you
My thirst for knowledge overwhelming

I'm now a phantom of the Night
Your child of the Darkness
A silent shadow in the evening
Sometime later we'll be meeting

Sep 11, 2006, 06:54 PM	#1 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,380	Workout.1 - Free Verse Free Verse: Is poetry which does not require meter or a rhyme scheme. Meter: Rhythm or pattern of syllables in the lines of a poem. Post any free verse poems you have here. ^^ __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 309	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse (Me dunno like much free verses there so empty.. o well here goes nothing.. an dont say i stoled this free verse from u ) Algebra numbers all the way so many problems that are over my head i get confused in the second and get bad points in it's test my head burns like calling for help cuz the exercises are so hard to resolve the existence of algebra gives me a lot of questions that get me no where in my mind weeee... im like in the space of infinity problems to solve i cant keep the letters on my head or ill explode and end in eternal dudas. __________________ perdoname michelle!
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse To Noah Love Mom You shadow my insides Linger within my darkness Make everyday yours and all I live for Your amber lining Set aflame Burning a piece of my heart away I have never met you But you already mean everything to me Taking every breath so much deeper To fill your lungs Your heart beat echoes __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Abu Dhabi Spoken for. Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Neither here... nor there. Posts: 1,508 Thanks: 12 Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 6,571	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse This is free. .................................................. Free to go here. ... Free to go there. Free to go anywhere. Free to be here with you. Free to be there with them. Free to exist. Free to not. Everything thing around here is free. __________________ Animal Friends! great day! want to read my comic? go here~!
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raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,477	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse this poem is one of the ones i posted in AO. this poem is made by me entirely. this poem is inspired from daddy long legs. hmmm... some of the lines do rhyme... but there are parts that don't rhyme also. this poem is long... wahehehe! ^^ Monsieur Smith Looking outside my window pane, My heart is filled with antagonizing pain As I set my black eyes upon a family Who are walking together cheerfully. My head is being stabbed With helplessness so sharp That I will never find someone Who’ll make the bleeding stop. It’s been fourteen lonesome years, That no caring father and mother, That no loving brothers or sisters, Are at hand to cuddle me in cold winter. My mind is filled with endless longing, My soul is in eternal wandering, My heart is in infinite suffering, That I will spend all my life in the orphanage. The hurtful thoughts almost invades My mind that nearly fades. Then, I heard a knocking sound That makes my heart pound. Hearing a loud voice outside that door Telling me go to the Office of Mrs. Lippett My heart continues to ponder, The reason I really don’t get. I opened the wooden door, Not knowing what is in store, I see a fleeting impression of the man The impression consisted entirely of tallness He is waving his arm towards an automobile That is waiting in the curved drive As it sprang into motion and approached, Head on for an instant. The glaring headlights threw his shadow Sharply against the wall inside The shadow pictured grotesquely Elongated legs and arms. That run along the floor and Up the wall of the corridor It looked, for all the world, like a huge Wavering daddy-long-legs. That image takes my breath away, Knowing how tall that man may be. I walked hurriedly to Mrs. Lippett’s office Before my excitement will cease. Then the ever so cold Mrs. Lippett Asked me if a saw a man As I walked into her office. I told her I only saw his elongated shadow Then, ever so cold Mrs. Lippett Begins to reveal the news That a Monsieur loved my poem And is now sending me to college. Hearing the news made my heart Feel that this is a brand new start. It feels that my soul suddenly shed its skin Into happiness from the loneliness it has been. Mrs. Lippett now tells me directly The Mr. John Smith is the kind monsieur Who sends orphans into college For the reason she also understand. I run outside her office Excitement whirls in to my mind Hoping that I, myself will find And thank the kind Monsieur. __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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BrightShadow_96 遁走より本当 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Inside Reality & Serenity Posts: 571 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,355	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse Silent Snow The snow falls so languidly, oh so languidly down to the ground resting on my feet cloaking my cold face- as cold as the snow flakes. Society shuffles past silently, oh so silently Walking around blindly in the snow Waiting for there lives to activate Ever-searching for the pending silence- All of the silence still to come. Nothing is everywhere, but everywhere is nothing, Nothing compared to the real world This real world of silent snow I am apart from this blindness, In so many ways. For I am the snow- Watching the people, Watching their flaws, Watching their lives. __________________
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HieisLove TOP DIVA KITTEN -purrs- Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a Runway Show Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,940	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse Forever My Love Ya opened up my heart Held me in your arms for the longest Them sweet kisses you gave me I know I want to Stay with you Be with you Forever and ever Forever and ever My heart feels like it’s Going to burst Going to burst I know I love you The burning love I know for you Did you know you’re on my mind? You probably didn’t know Are you my soul mate? Because it feels like destiny With I feel complete Do you feel same? Stay with you Be with you Forever and ever Forever and ever My heart feels like it’s Going to burst Going to burst I know I love you Words can’t explain it We’re too far I can’t show it You accepted my heart I yours in return __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Soldat of life RPG Lord and Master/Poet Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada) Posts: 850 Thanks: 1 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 4,048	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse Watery eyes A look upon your life, The tears that fall freely. Gracefully you look back, At the time that are no more. Hoping for it all to come back, Blooming about your imagination. Holding dearly what is most important, Feeling the doubt fade away. Awakening to a new world, Opening your eyes to joy. Breaking apart all that is wrong, Chanting the fears away from your ears. Closing off the word never from your mind, Tearing away the barriers that were so strong. Erasing what was once a mistake, Clearing the way to a new hope. Racing upon a lasting raceway, Stoping before what is reality. Not truly understanding, Letting things be as they are. Accepting the world in all its saddness, Cherishing every moment that is not shallow. Showing emotion to every event, Glorifying the day that has begun. Prancing about what is best, Filling a half full cup. Looking at the sky so high... ...Flying freely above the clouds accompanied by the stars. __________________ Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^ Poetry Corner
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Sep 17, 2006, 02:33 AM	#9 (permalink)
ROCKANIME2007 Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse down town this is crap the stuff down town low price stuff wonderful not they brake cause of the third rate making downtown huge towers big trees dead leaves old music stores the size of my house but still life is great downtown
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HieisLove TOP DIVA KITTEN -purrs- Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a Runway Show Posts: 883 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,940	Re: Workout.1 - Free Verse Her Insanity Darkness sqruims in the night Bleed of depression Lifeless shell lay under The crying sky Pleading of help One dies hopelessly Dull eyes stare at nothing Loniness drive one to nothing Finally a place to run to Vanishing soul travels Released all doubts Memories gone finally blank Cuts of the flesh Left on her wrists Pills spilled on the ground Broken glass stained with blood Pain the ran through her Tears ran down her face Words ran through her mind Doubts didn't stop her Unhappiness; No love; No hope; Her insanity __________________ ~Music Is My Boyfriend!!~
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Oct 09, 2006, 12:44 PM	#11 (permalink)
hyuuga13 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Arvilla Posts: 324 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 2,891	Night Lover I know i posted this elsewhere but i wanted your opinions To what do I owe the pleasure Your face outside my window Ghastly white like fresh fallen snow Your alluring eyes grip hold my soul I leave my bed and open my window Allowing you entrance upon my threshold Your eyes hold mine in a transfixed gaze My fate is sealed in an unknown maze You come close to me Your warm breath upon my cheek I feel the sharpness of your fangs As they graze the jaw-line of my neck They slowly sink into my flesh As pale as the moon on a summer night Crimson fluid spills down my chest Life as I know it is drained from my neck Slowly the room begins to fade I start to slide from your embrace I collapse to the floor hardly conscious I'm so weak I'm barely breathing Your shadow falls across me As I lay there in the dark Your voice an echo in my head A choice is placed before I'm dead I try to decline your offer But my soul accepts your dark gift The pain rushes through me again Blood fills my mind and vision I feel my strength return Like liquid fire in my veins I slowly sit upright and turn towards you My thirst for knowledge overwhelming I'm now a phantom of the Night Your child of the Darkness A silent shadow in the evening Sometime later we'll be meeting __________________ Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!
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