Workout.2 - Free Verse

*Kasai* · Oct 23, 2006, 02:10 AM

Create a poem about an event of creepiness. Let's say, I write about walking home one night and I felt as if someone was watching me. Or, in my house something really weird starts to happen.

I'd write a poem about'em. So, anything too hard to comprehend? Should I change my wording?

Get busy!

*Abu Dhabi* · Oct 23, 2006, 12:17 PM

in the morning darkness
light came
from the suns of man
that lined the streets

in that fading light
stood a figure
waiting
simply wating

his stance was
oppsote from mine
his eyes
in another direction

but i felt
they were going my way
as i walked down
a long dark road

fear was running up
and
down my body
like a flight of stairs

only until i heard
familiar dogs
bark
did i not turn my head in fear

only until i was
in the bed of my lover
did my heart
feel bright

Soldat of life · Oct 23, 2006, 06:09 PM

The Call

I see the task set before me,
Walking along a path already made.
The lights go out one after another,
A cemetary on my left with eerie lights.
Sensing souls all around me,
To keep them away I cannot.

At home my thoughts are suddenly at loss,
I think upon the walk I had.
Presence of any desire leaves my body,
Wishing to be rid of this strange feeling.
As I fall asleep in my bed,
Nightmares fill my uneasy mind.

Not long after I awaken in sweat,
The cemetary lying around me wherever I look.
Sounds unwelcoming fill my ears,
Hands from the ground greet my awakening.
Finally I rest for one last time,
My body slowly decomposing among the dead.

Nympho · Oct 23, 2006, 09:35 PM

Extra-paranoid

Got home from work late again
Watching the stars
In the kitchen now
Light flickers above the sink

For a second i hold my breath
Something has caught my attention
An off set hum beckoning me to come outside
I hesitate and then lock the door quickly

I swear them aliens are out to get me
With there camo skin
Experimentation

Uneasy i lay in my bed
There eyes are watching
Stars miles behind them
They live in my backyard

UFO Conference - Mexican Never Seen UFOs - Fantastic !!! - Google Video

***This free verse is about this video. I am still freaked out about it. If you watch the whole thing. You might be too! But it is long! Over an hour! And i still can't walk around the house at night without bieng all paranoid

raja_psyche · Oct 24, 2006, 05:32 AM

Third eye

Why am I seeing things
That people can’t see?
Why am I hearing screams
That no one can’t hear?

Every now and then I fear,
Of seeing people who are bleeding,
But every time I draw near,
My hands pass right through them.

My ears are getting worn-out,
From the infinite deafening screams,
The endless curses of revenge,
The pleas for help on unfinished business.

What can I possibly do?
I couldn’t ask anyone for help!
Alone would I ever suffer,
From this life I am fated for.

*Baal* · Oct 28, 2006, 10:53 AM

A night full of torment
screams, blood everwere
dark nights full of killers
bats flying eating anything

Houses that can swallow cars
crud meat on the floor
walking gouls
doors that open by themself

laughts with creepines
a lot of death evry hour
and raise of the dead
on the hour

A town full of ghost
building cracked with
cerberus guarding
demons and red glares

Oct 23, 2006, 02:10 AM	#1 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,380	Workout.2 - Free Verse Create a poem about an event of creepiness. Let's say, I write about walking home one night and I felt as if someone was watching me. Or, in my house something really weird starts to happen. I'd write a poem about'em. So, anything too hard to comprehend? Should I change my wording? Get busy! __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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Oct 23, 2006, 12:17 PM	#2 (permalink)
Abu Dhabi Spoken for. Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Neither here... nor there. Posts: 1,503 Thanks: 12 Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts Credits: 6,229	Re: Workout.2 - Free Verse in the morning darkness light came from the suns of man that lined the streets in that fading light stood a figure waiting simply wating his stance was oppsote from mine his eyes in another direction but i felt they were going my way as i walked down a long dark road fear was running up and down my body like a flight of stairs only until i heard familiar dogs bark did i not turn my head in fear only until i was in the bed of my lover did my heart feel bright __________________ Happy Anniversary, Darling! Click there to see the great day! want to read my comic? go here~!
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Soldat of life RPG Lord and Master/Poet Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Sainte-Foy, Qc (Canada) Posts: 848 Thanks: 1 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 3,879	Re: Workout.2 - Free Verse The Call I see the task set before me, Walking along a path already made. The lights go out one after another, A cemetary on my left with eerie lights. Sensing souls all around me, To keep them away I cannot. At home my thoughts are suddenly at loss, I think upon the walk I had. Presence of any desire leaves my body, Wishing to be rid of this strange feeling. As I fall asleep in my bed, Nightmares fill my uneasy mind. Not long after I awaken in sweat, The cemetary lying around me wherever I look. Sounds unwelcoming fill my ears, Hands from the ground greet my awakening. Finally I rest for one last time, My body slowly decomposing among the dead. __________________ Thanks to Xelhes for this amazing work of art ^.^ Poetry Corner
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Oct 23, 2006, 09:35 PM	#4 (permalink)
Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Re: Workout.2 - Free Verse Extra-paranoid Got home from work late again Watching the stars In the kitchen now Light flickers above the sink For a second i hold my breath Something has caught my attention An off set hum beckoning me to come outside I hesitate and then lock the door quickly I swear them aliens are out to get me With there camo skin Experimentation Uneasy i lay in my bed There eyes are watching Stars miles behind them They live in my backyard UFO Conference - Mexican Never Seen UFOs - Fantastic !!! - Google Video *This free verse is about this video. I am still freaked out about it. If you watch the whole thing. You might be too! But it is long! Over an hour! And i still can't walk around the house at night without bieng all paranoid __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.**
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Oct 24, 2006, 05:32 AM	#5 (permalink)
raja_psyche Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient Posts: 393 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,477	Re: Workout.2 - Free Verse Third eye Why am I seeing things That people can’t see? Why am I hearing screams That no one can’t hear? Every now and then I fear, Of seeing people who are bleeding, But every time I draw near, My hands pass right through them. My ears are getting worn-out, From the infinite deafening screams, The endless curses of revenge, The pleas for help on unfinished business. What can I possibly do? I couldn’t ask anyone for help! Alone would I ever suffer, From this life I am fated for. __________________ Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
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Oct 28, 2006, 10:53 AM	#6 (permalink)
Baal S.E.L - sexy etna lover Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Mayaguez Posts: 1,066 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 309	Re: Workout.2 - Free Verse A night full of torment screams, blood everwere dark nights full of killers bats flying eating anything Houses that can swallow cars crud meat on the floor walking gouls doors that open by themself laughts with creepines a lot of death evry hour and raise of the dead on the hour A town full of ghost building cracked with cerberus guarding demons and red glares __________________ perdoname michelle!
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