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    Workout.3

    The new verses will be on: love.
    I know everyone have atleast experienced it in some way. I chose it because I seemed to have well background of poems and songs I wrote about love. Well here it can be expressed in your own special way. The poem/song has to have quatrains of five. Well get to it
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    Re: Workout.3




    A Doll’s Confession

    Sitting in an old wooden chair,
    My violet eyes are at constant stare
    In the direction of my doll maker,
    The doll maker, who is my creator.

    His words are like harmony in my heart,
    His every single deed brings joy.
    The way he looks makes my heart feel
    Emotions I never knew would be real.

    I feel so worthless and weak,
    In the times I do see him cry
    Knowing that I can’t wipe his tears
    And to calm his innermost fears.

    The thing that they call life,
    Is what I will forever long for,
    To make it possible for me to confess
    My love and adoration to my dearest!


    Is it a sin for a doll like me,
    To love the being who created me?
    Is it wrong for me to feel,
    The passion destined for human beings?

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    Re: Workout.3

    Love can be clever


    It might take forever
    will reaching the stars
    holding strong together
    while resisting to the last

    theres a small feeling in you
    deep inside the light
    who knew love was clever
    it change m entire life

    I can see within you
    what's inside that heart
    it gives me a feeling
    to make a new start

    love can hold us stronger
    more than you think
    we can dream forever
    will reaching the new life
    Last edited by Baal; Nov 18, 2006 at 12:18 PM.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Workout.3

    My only; His only angel

    His glowing angel I am
    His dying love he has for me
    An answered prayer I am of his
    His forever I am
    For years I cried my tears,

    For years he held me
    For so long I been sad
    For so long I wanted love
    He, who will be my only;
    My other; My hope; My everything

    The warmth he gives me
    I smile of happiness
    I know it was meant to be
    I know this was destiny
    I wish upon a star that this is true

    I rather die than to be alone;
    To be with out my love
    And I know he too rather die
    Than to be without
    His only angel


    Note: short poem this doesn't count.
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    Re: Workout.3

    Love

    Within a moment of silence,
    I walked alone in the snow.
    Guiding my steps was my life,
    Fading away in the darkness of the night.
    Yet a light came upon me, and shined brightly.
    Leaving a trace of my journey that has just begun.

    I searched on and on for the jewel in the night,
    There was nothing to find in the light of the day.
    Everything seemed so bright when lit by the eternal sphere,
    The obscurity showing bare what truly was there.
    Upon the second night, there was one who radiated,
    I gazed upon it, attracted by its luminescence.
    Loosing sight of my path, I neared my first hope.

    At first I dreamed of what was to be the one,
    Yielding nothing more than fantasy in reality.
    Slowly transcending the imaginary,
    I finally fell upon this golden chance to glory.
    There was a certain calling from where she stood,
    Upon a higher ground did she seem to my being.
    The curtains fell as I finally neared my desires.

    Colors that made me hallucinate in admiration,
    Reason in utter delusion before this coloration.
    Trying to make out the best aspects of this star,
    Inexistant was the imperfection of this marvel.
    As she spoke the first creation of her mind,
    Shattered glass fell at my feet and I was destroyed.
    Living a lost hope, a mirror of what once was love...
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