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Oct 31, 2006, 08:20 PM
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 Credits: 2,880 | Workout.3 The new verses will be on: love. I know everyone have atleast experienced it in some way. I chose it because I seemed to have well background of poems and songs I wrote about love. Well here it can be expressed in your own special way. The poem/song has to have quatrains of five. Well get to it 
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Nov 02, 2006, 04:17 AM
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Credits: 1,477 | Re: Workout.3   A Doll’s Confession Sitting in an old wooden chair, My violet eyes are at constant stare In the direction of my doll maker, The doll maker, who is my creator. His words are like harmony in my heart, His every single deed brings joy. The way he looks makes my heart feel Emotions I never knew would be real. I feel so worthless and weak, In the times I do see him cry Knowing that I can’t wipe his tears And to calm his innermost fears. The thing that they call life, Is what I will forever long for, To make it possible for me to confess My love and adoration to my dearest! Is it a sin for a doll like me, To love the being who created me? Is it wrong for me to feel, The passion destined for human beings?
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Nov 03, 2006, 09:39 PM
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Credits: 309 | Re: Workout.3 Love can be clever It might take forever will reaching the stars holding strong together while resisting to the last theres a small feeling in you deep inside the light who knew love was clever it change m entire life I can see within you what's inside that heart it gives me a feeling to make a new start love can hold us stronger more than you think we can dream forever will reaching the new life
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Nov 07, 2006, 06:15 AM
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Credits: 2,880 | Re: Workout.3 My only; His only angel His glowing angel I am His dying love he has for me An answered prayer I am of his His forever I am For years I cried my tears, For years he held me For so long I been sad For so long I wanted love He, who will be my only; My other; My hope; My everything The warmth he gives me I smile of happiness I know it was meant to be I know this was destiny I wish upon a star that this is true I rather die than to be alone; To be with out my love And I know he too rather die Than to be without His only angel Note: short poem this doesn't count.
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Credits: 3,879 | Re: Workout.3 Love Within a moment of silence, I walked alone in the snow. Guiding my steps was my life, Fading away in the darkness of the night. Yet a light came upon me, and shined brightly. Leaving a trace of my journey that has just begun. I searched on and on for the jewel in the night, There was nothing to find in the light of the day. Everything seemed so bright when lit by the eternal sphere, The obscurity showing bare what truly was there. Upon the second night, there was one who radiated, I gazed upon it, attracted by its luminescence. Loosing sight of my path, I neared my first hope. At first I dreamed of what was to be the one, Yielding nothing more than fantasy in reality. Slowly transcending the imaginary, I finally fell upon this golden chance to glory. There was a certain calling from where she stood, Upon a higher ground did she seem to my being. The curtains fell as I finally neared my desires. Colors that made me hallucinate in admiration, Reason in utter delusion before this coloration. Trying to make out the best aspects of this star, Inexistant was the imperfection of this marvel. As she spoke the first creation of her mind, Shattered glass fell at my feet and I was destroyed. Living a lost hope, a mirror of what once was love... |
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