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| 7/23/2006 7:30am | Rating: 6.00 |
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Kasai
Domme
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You have potential. I like the idea of the wallpaper. ------------------------------ Seduced by Flesh  |
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| 7/31/2006 12:49am | Rating: 7.00 |
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Zdenek
Otaku
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You could perhaps make the letters less prominent by setting transparency to them. (Try removing the word Rising, "Red Moon" looks enough of a talk for a wall. Plus one can assingn it an additional meaning better.) The moon is out of proportions, make it rounder. Asuka (if it's her) is standing in a Betadine ocean with black lingerie on and trying to take a pic of the moon, amirite? Try to play with Hue on the water and perhaps on the sky too to make it more purple. It will match with her skin and the moon too. Try to add some shore layer with a bush that would somewhat hide her legs to suggest that he is hiding shyly from the viewer's perspective. For the sake of the shore, try to extrapolate her legs (if the render ended where the water level is now) - the small defects are negligible, because it will disappear behind the bush anyway. The red bar around is also a minus, especially when the icons take their place. They will inevitably look fallen out of the frame. Please make a version two! EDIT: How's this one?  ------------------------------ 
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