Conversation Between Renn and Asagi

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  1. Whew. . . long time not see. . . Renn
    hey, i make a new story. i hope you wanna read it,
    you can contact me . . . if you want
  2. advanced
    one day ... events that occurred a few people make a life change ...
    the gate is open, bring several people from the future to the past ...
    generation to find their hero legend
    among people who take them, there is a woman who have the power to ... but no one knew.
  3. after thinking
    I will continue the story that I made earlier ...

    I am very pleased to have people who want to read the story that I make ...
  4. her school in the city atrun

    I am too difficult to make a story ...
    sorry ... I may not have any talent to write a story ...
  5. advanced
    end user to the existence of the power of nature disappear ...
    100 years later, the future
    there are girls who have the power to ...
    but she does not know it ...
  6. I apologize, I said-many words that one ...
    I will describe the details ...
  7. I think it's pretty good. I do see grammer errors. IF you could just add a little more detail, then I would love to read it. I like to make fantasys too. ^__^ Next time, if you want, you can pm the stories to me and I can look over it.
  8. story that I make, most of the fantasy ... never mind eh ...
    The beginning ~ ~
    started from a life past the curse of one-another ...
    between human and natural power users ...
    to end the human user's need help to sustain the strength of the world to remain stable ...
    they work with each other, and ultimately need each other.
    user's life force of nature concealed, it is because many of the human heart is evil ... the strength of their utuk want something that bad

    how? not good?
  9. DOn't worry I won't. I understand how that is. I too, can still be considered a beginner
  10. of course, but if many of the essay
    me that I am wrong ... you do not laugh at ...
    because actually I am still a beginner
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