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  1. lots of holding the space bar then making the smilie
  2. hi renn!
  3. I recommend it. It's a solid film with solid actors.
  4. Hahaha yes it is. As a matter of fact I just bought it for the Nintendo Wii. It's actually my first time playing this franchise. Was always more of a Harvest moon kind of guy.
  5. I made another poem alittle while ago mainly from my fears, but I think it is better that the first oe I posted. The first one was for heart. This one was from my fear. Tell me what ya think.
  6. Ima brainstorm and work out another poem before I log off for bed. . I wanna try to be a more active writer. Stories and poems. I also wanna start drawing more. I love to do all those, but I am so self-concious about em it sucks. I need to ignore some of the responses I got got to my story Kalderim and finish that too sometime.

    BTW I am alway open for advice. puhwease gimme advice from time to time XD.
  7. Don't get me wrong. I love the poem. I think it is great. Just needed to work on the effect a bit more lolz. I think if ya take more time and tweek your poems, you'd be great.

    But My poem is about what I am going thru right now. Which SUCKS!
  8. That is alittle overboard. Starting EVERY sentance with "The moment i touch you" is alittle to much. I admit I used to many to's, but I used it for a more broad effect. Yo kinda over did it. Plus I think you should experimented with better words. Words that sounded more fluid. I messed up myself with the wording, but I tried and so did you .

    But a tip--If ya gonna use the repeat effect. Enter the rest of it in the next line and place a comma after. Looks better and shows the effect better .

    But I like yours A LOT. I think it might be better than mine if ya made it more longer and emotional
  9. The reason there is a lot of "To" is for effect lolz. It is a poem I wrote in school for a grade and the damn teach read it in front of everyone cause it was the best poem out of all 7 of her classes. I was PISSED! but i decided get over the fear and post it on AO also.
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